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by DementedAngel

person Plum drop
schedule May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's been such a long time. I love this story I've read it all the way through at lest 3 times. I would love a new ch to enjoy. Pretty plz?
person mel
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wish you would update but maybe you've moved on... def one of my fav fics ever.
person kei
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...doesn't look like an update has been made in a long time. Lost total interest in the story? Or have you found a different place to host it? I would love to know.

This story gives everything about fanfiction within the inuyasha fandom a whole new look. It's intense, and breathtaking. It's very hard to put into words how well written and aw-striking this story really is. I love how Inuyasha keeps true to himself. He acts just like how I would imagine he'd act in this type of situation. And Kouga! Amazing being able to keep him in character. I think a lot of authors stray away from their true nature, and it's refreshing to see someone with talent actually be able to not stray.

I'd hate to think that you'll never finish this, but at the same time shit happens.

What you should take away from this story if you have in-fact stopped writing it, is that it is truly amazing. You have set a new standard and it'll be hard for me to find a story or author that is able to compile a story as great as yours.

If you have finished this story and have posted it somewhere else please email me, so I can finish xD! Lol! Again if not, I'll try to let my imagination finish it for me, however it's not as creative as yours.

Thank you for the awesome read!
person The Head Baka
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry, you've got us all wrapped around your fingers.


On the subject of receptive websites, on the other hand...

I would reccommend- as highly as I myself could possibly merit- that you look into yaoi dot y-gallery dot net. Not only will you be able to put it up there, but they were MADE for this kind of thing. You can set up a club and be freely able to submit pieces to it as well as other users being able to post fanart. Or a project, if you want to be the only one posting there. Chances are a good portion of your fans on here are already over there anyway- same demographic- and good work shared there tends to get fervently acknowledged. Additionally, you need not worry about the squeamish: there is an entire chunk of the population on y!gal devoted SPECIFICALLY to the cacophany of fleash-tearing lusts that is the general classification of "/f/ Guro" art and fiction and such. If you yourself are
acquainted with that movement then all the better for the purpose of my explanation!

Much love and admiration,
The Head Baka
person The Head Baka
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, gods. Oh, heavenly something that haunts me like a dead lover- this... This is just... :makes choking sound: I... I've been doing this, this dance of forgotten logic called pornography since I was NINE, dammit, and I still haven't--
Let me just say this. I, as a human being of reasonable breeding age with a fully functional endocrine system, am consumed by these thoughts. Writing them brings up almost more questions than the satisfaction of setting them down is worth, and someday it will cease to be useful or enough, whichever may come first but for now I spend
most of the time I enjoy engaging in the dreams, nightmares, and multifarious musings of my fellow men and women; at this point given the quantity of such materials I have perused I have the impetuous folly to consider myself something of a connoiseur of their kind. I would like to let you know, however, for whatever little it is most likely worth, that I haven't seen anything half this good for a long, long time. I can probably count on one hand the number of times I have felt this way about something.
You done good, Madame. You done real good.
Lacking anything more relevant or closer to the truth than that feeble sentiment, I leave you with that in hopes that any of this made
sense. I hope it did.
Cheers.
person Eleke
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm a very, very, bad reader. I've been following this story since near the beginning, and just now realized that I have yet to review it! Well, my new years' resolution was to start reviewing stories that I enjoy, so I'm going to do so now.

I. Love. This. A favorite genre of mine is stories in which a character goes into 'heat,' or ingests an aphrodisiac, or gets hit with a blast of sex-pollen, or whatever, and this does it perfect. I love how bestial and primal Inuyasha is, and Kouga's slow wearing down. He's beginning to accept his place for the time being, but he's still very much an independent, tough, brash, and prideful man, instead of becoming someone he definitely isn't. Plus, his self-sacrifice just makes him so much more appealing in this story, and as someone who didn't care much for him in canon, that means you wrote him very, very well.

I'm definitely interested in reading more, but considering how long it's been since you updated, I'm going to guess that it may be lost in WIP Hell. Which is a bit disappointing, but I understand how life works and how more important things get in the way of writing. Still, I'm going to come back every now and then to re-read what you have written, as it is very enjoyable.

A small suggestion as for where you can post it - Livejournal has a very active fanfiction community, and there are quite a few places that would welcome some fresh Inuyasha fics with open arms. Plus, you can post the artwork you have created onto the site as well. Just a suggestion, you can take it with a grain of salt. :)
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an amzing story. I really enjoy reading it and can't wait for more! I can't wait to find out what happens when Inuyasha returns to normal!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person mika
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG Im so happy that uve finally updated this fic! I hope u finishe it soo but then again i also dont want it to end. I luv it!
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am still loving this!!! Please keep updating!! ^_^