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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the interaction between these characters ....its so compelling! This chapter was amazing, especially since we now
begin to see to what lengths Kagura is planning to go, in order to carry out her revenge on Rin. Not caring
about anyone but herself, I wonder if she plans on revealing to Kouga the extent of Rin's relationship with
Sesshomaru and revealing to Rin the fact that Kouga was one of her "cast-offs". I think the roller coaster ride
is about to take the first loop! Time to throw the "Bitch Switch" on!!
begin to see to what lengths Kagura is planning to go, in order to carry out her revenge on Rin. Not caring
about anyone but herself, I wonder if she plans on revealing to Kouga the extent of Rin's relationship with
Sesshomaru and revealing to Rin the fact that Kouga was one of her "cast-offs". I think the roller coaster ride
is about to take the first loop! Time to throw the "Bitch Switch" on!!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry it took me sooo long to read! So much stuff to do. It was a good chapter, although I don't exactly get some parts, like the end.... but reallly can't wait till you update again! Please do so soon!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, please continue!! I'm in suspense here lol...I'll keep checking back! Please don't leave me hanging :P
<3
<3
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was a very good chapter and specially the ending .
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I liked this chapter! =D
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Sesshoumaru is losing it. And why does Ayame feel so guilty? Kouga is a kewl brother. And Rin needs to pull herself together....why dis Kagura call Kouga her lover?!Me soo cunfuzzled!!T_T Great chapter. Update soon please.^^
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh wow, he's not cheating on Ayame is he? Can I kill him now?? I think Ayame sensed something.... crapola, you have to come back soon!
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story and after the first chapter I had to stop and print up all eight chapters. You see I needed to go downstairs, get comfy and have a smoke while reading such a great story. (I don't smoke upstairs in our office.) I could not put this fic down. What a fun and creative story. I usually don't read AU fics or Rin/Sess fics, but this caught my attention. You've done a wonderful job here and I look forward to future chapters. ^_^
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay usually I have better reviews than this but I'm in a bit of a hurry. Nice story. I give you credit for the view you put on in the first chapters. The way you told us about the other characters (Kagome, InuYasha, Miroku, and Sango) But you never ACTUALLY use them. Like the reverse to a InuYasha/Kagome story where the writer just says Sesshoumaru was off doing whatever and then pops up with a girlfriend. I like the way you made Rin's job seem okay. Not like the usual where the girl goes home in tears and wants someone to rescue her for her job. But I'm not so sure why Sesshomaru is acting the way he is. I probably read it to fast or something. I'll re-read it again later. But if you want someone then why are you punishing them like THAT? (Not you..Sesshomaru) I mean that's why women invented the silent treatment, the cold shoulder, and all that crap. You don't leave someone you want up for somebody else to grab. You take them let them know you are mad and then later you make up. Simple. But I can't wait to see why you made Kouga on of Kagura's one night stands. And Ayame is pregnant right? Right?! But I'll guess I have to sit back and wait for Sesshomaru and Rin to stop torturing themselves and each other.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapters! No, more like sad;_;Everything is just gettin' so screwed up! I mean, there's Rin & Sesshy, and Kouga & Ayame are almost even worst! Kouga can't do a whore like Kagura!!! He just can't!!!*sigh*I can already see the oncoming tragedy.u_u
Btw, I understand the whole Kikyo thing now^^I feel the smae way about Kagome.
Btw, I understand the whole Kikyo thing now^^I feel the smae way about Kagome.