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for Just Grind

by AJs

person sessami
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a really really great story i loved the dance songs too!! it was awsome!!! plz plz update ASAP!!!!
person Cassie
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm one of your fans and I was wondering when u were going to update your fic its really really good and I really want to know if Sesshomaru and Rin will get back together....... and to see if Sesshomaru will apologize for the way he treated her. Please update I'm waiting patiently like all the other fans.....^_______________^
person LadyDogDemon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:::::::sing song voice:::::::: i love this story update soon
person Caramel
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and do ch.9!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Larissa
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you finish this story!!
<3
person Lenne
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH UPDATE!!!!!!!^-^
person Sailortee
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rating 50 out of 10*****************************

I normally don't read rin and Sesshy fics But I really was curious about this one.
A friend Recommended this story to me and I am so happy she did anyways......
Oh my*clears throat* This is a VERY good story I was hooked from the very 1st sentence.
I have to say congrats on how very descriptive you are. It was one of the things that had me so in
awed by this story. And the the one that gets me the most your love scenes are very sensual not
distasteful or down right nasty. They really had me feelings the moments. This is the kind of writing I
Enjoy reading. Please keep up the good work and I hope to see A update soon:-) Oh yeah
Thank you for sharing your work too:-)
person PixiQueen
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I love you writing your imagination, your boldness. you dont shy away from the details and that makes your work so much more compelling. I dint know why im just now telling yiu this i have been reading Just Grind from the start. Keep on it girl!!!!!!!!!
PixiQueen
person Larka
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is REALLY good! I like... no LOVE it! It's got a great way of making a reader jump over the edge when you have these dark moments so to say. I love it all and I hope you update A.S.A.P!!! Chow for now!
person sphinx
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the attention seems to shift frm rin and sess to the others.. will sess come to the cemetary to look fer rin? aniwae cant wait fer the next chap! update soon