rate_review Reviews

Thanks for the update. We'll be waiting for the next installment.

*dies of happiness for the 7th time today* OMG!!! I loved this chapter! Such great details!! I don't see WHY you would EVER hate it! I wish I could write such good details in my stories! But alas I'm still in the intermidiate zone. Anyways, this was awesome! I wonder what Kagome's hiding and how Kouga's going to react knowing Ayame saw him... And I also wonder what he'll do about Kagura and Ayame. And what about Sesshoumaru and Rin?!! AH!!! YOU LEFT US HANGING IN TOO MANY AREAS!!! I MUST KNOW!!! YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!!

This story is SOOOOOOO good! You have GOT to update soon! I love it too much to keep waiting!! @.@

holy crap, everyone is like cheating or fighting with each other or theres so much misunderstanding! that's what makes a fic so awesome, all the angst!! UPDATE SOON!!

PK

Great chapter! You are really building up the suspense, I can hardly stand it. What is going to happen?
I like how you brought Kagome in here. Everyone thought they were the perfect couple, so happy, so in love
and then BOOM, the truth is revealed, that nothing is perfect. I am curious to see what Kagome's and Ayame's
secrets are. And that Kouga, what a dirty wolf! How could he do that? I bet Kagura is doing it all to get to Rin.
Well, thank you for sharing your story with me, you are a great writer. Sorry you did not feel it was a good chapter.
I did enjoy it and from the looks of the other reviews so did your other readers. I know how it feels to not be pleased
with the end result after pouring your heart and time into it. And of course you are welcome, I hardly helped, but thank
you for flattering me!!!

I love your story. You are a very talented writer. That being said I'm not flaming you,...so don't take this wrong... (puts on her blond wig)...but I'm confused...I can tell that I'm going to have to reread this story from the beginning. Did I miss that part of Inu and Kags in this story or are you just bringing that in? And wasn't ayame in school while kouga was with kagura? (I love kouga but I think you got me to turn on him... how could he?!?!) You are torturing me with sess/rin (which might be what you are going for...with full out angst) that last statement made me think he was going to rape her. But other then that...I still LOVE your story and can't wait to read more.

I agree with you on the whole Kikyo thing, I mean with the whole Inuyasha ordeal, I do notice that they are in a way one in the same, because they can't rid their feelingfs for one another, despite Kagome's presence, in fact I think only having Kagome there, puts a whole big twist with Inuyasha and Kikyo's relationship, but that's my opinion anyway. I loved this chapter, It was amazing, I liked the way you included new characters and all, it was good, I'm dying to know what's going to happen with Ayame, Kouga, and Kagura *growls* Rin, Sesshomaru. Inuyasha, Kagome, and Kikyo. So much suspense, why can't you load your chapters any faster. Please, for me?

WoW! What a chapie! So many things happened...but thats the good thing ^_^ I cant wait to see what happens between Rin and Sesshomaru! How in the world did Sesshomaru know to go to the graveyard? Was it just that Soulmate thing? Or did Sesshomaru follow her sent? ponder ponder ponder....And Kouga. Grrrrrrrrrrr dont evan get me starrted oh him! That 2 timeing little @$$. And and Kaugra! My goodness and right infront of Ayame!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh Ayame! what's going to happen???? PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon! This chapie was wonderfull! You outdid yourself! (makes me wonder what the other ones will be like) Well, I cant wait till you update, untill then.......


~Ever Rin~

I think i'm rather lost in this, lol. Too many girls! I can't wait for more!! I need to get all these girls and who likes/loves who straightened out :)

that was great... you must write more SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN damnit soon.....And i offically hate Koga.........ayway keep up the great work!!! and HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPPY!!!