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i loved it, but i hope everything works out, stupid kouga, so weak.

okie this story is getting "bit complicated... what's up with the secrets here and there... the most confusin is y is kagura and kouga together... and also i'm seriously not expectin kagome and kikyo comin into this story... sigh.. well aniwae i'll still be readin it then so pls update soon... hope there's something more interestin bet rin/sess relationship

Yay!!!!! new chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the great fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE A.S.A.P.!!!!!!!!!! [insert trademark evil laughter here-> MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!]
>_<# "Grrrrrr, evil brain-eating flying monkeys, arghhh!!!!!"

O.O' whassss???

So much confusion, so many secrets, jee sounds like real life! But really, what's happening with Kagome? That was completely unexpected and at first I didn't know who it was... well, at least something will happen between Sess and Rin, have her kick him where it hurts! That would be somewhat amusing. And then Koga, sheesh, why can't he keep it in his pants or Kagura for that matter? Poor Ayame, hopefully Koga gets what he deserves, and shes pregnant for crying out loud! Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!

First of all, WHAT THE FUCK!!!

Second of all, WHAT THE FUCK!!!

Third of all, ok what was this about??? I mean, I thought this chapter was gonna
be about Sess and Rin, like most the rest of the story, but no,
somehow Kagome gets dragged in this along with Kikyo which concludes
one and two being WHAT THE FUCK, how does that go with the rest of the
story????

Forth of all, What past does KAGURA have with KOGA????? How could you make him
Kiss her BACK??? NO NO NO NO NO!!!! ahhhhh, no, why blossum WHY???

Fith of all, Ok OK, so all that confusing stuff happened, and in the middle of it
(almost litteral) Rin and Sess happen to meet, but nothing sweet, just a
"Sesshomaru?" "Rin." and a chase that we don't get to hear about till the
next chap I'm guessing??? NO NO NO, WHY WHY WHY!!! No fair! I want
more, but you have to leave us hanging ont that damn cliff! You could at
Least give us a rope! I mean come on now-------wait, I wan't talkin about
that kind of cliff was I? Anyways

UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON, LIKE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOONER THAN TWO WEEKS!!!
PLZZZZZZ, I MEAN IF IT'S ALREADY WRITTEN AND ALL (that is what you said right?)

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You know you're right it was missing something, but I can't put my finger on it either well, maybe it will come to me later too, maybe it wasn't enough Sesshomaru and Rin and too much of everyone else.......and wow kouga and kagura I would have never known them 2 to be an item, but hey anything is possible.... What will Sesshomaru do or say when he catches her.... and will she forgive him for hurting her the way he did... and he should get down on his hands and knees and beg for her forgiveness and when he gets it they should make up fro lost time in the bedroom if u know what I mean......... Can't wait for chapter 10....... Love it !!!!!!!!!!! ^________^

Naughty, Naughty Kouga! Slap on wrist! I hope Ayame makes him sweat it out (and tears Kagura's head off in the process!) Can't wait for chapter 10. Naughty, Naughty Kouga!

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! you have so many things going on with all the characters now.....first, my main love Rin and Sesshomaru...so now he wants to claim her, I hoping you have her reject him this time, before they are together forever.....his human side need to know how it feels to be hurt badly....second, Ayame...I'm still dieing to know her secers ....what is it???? you're killing me here...and Kouga, how could he??? He got the best thing in his life and he throwing it away on a slut!!!!! AAAAHHHHH!!!!!...now the Kagome and Kikyo part was good but, it felt kind of throw in because you set up your story as a Rin and Ayame tale then you put in Kagome. The reader knew she was there but she wasn't apart of the main focus which were Rin and Ayame. Now don't get mad at me!!!!! I'm just putting in my opionion......but, as always I can't wait until the next chapter and just keep it up........

omg this chappie was so intense I loved it. I'm finding out more about the characters and their lil secrets. I wonder if Kagome's and Ayame's secrets r the same? And I feel so sry for rin but I think sess is gonna make her a hole lot better ^_~ I cant wait to read the next chappie and find out wat happens. And omg poor ayame how could tat SoB do tat to her and especially with tat b**** man I mean kagura seems so much worse than kikyou rite now -_- *small squeel*
I just love ur story and I hav the feeling tat the next chappie will b just as good as ch. 9 ^_^

God!!!! please update agian soon this is my favorit story!!