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Noooo!! You can't just stop there! Come ooonnn! I'm dyin' here! It's really good for the ninth chapter, please hurry with the rest! x.x!!

Hey! Wow that was another great chapter! It was surprising! Poor Ayame! WAHH! Anyways, great job please update soon! Lets hope Kagura doesn't try anything else with Koga! UPDATE SOON!

That parasite Kagura! I just knew she had a past with Kouga. Seems like she not only wants
to drive Ayame away so Rin won't have her as a friend, but also seduce Kouga so he will spend
time with her and abandon Rin as well. The Kagome/Kikyo thing was a surprise. Didn't expect
trouble in Paradise for Kagome and Inuyasha. Great chapter as always...characters are getting
complex. Still want Kouga to rough Sesshomaru up a little for trifling with his sister. Question...
apparently Sess had no idea he had "sloppy seconds" when he was with Kagura, or is Kouga
the one about to have a nauseating "third helping"? Honestly, she's like a screen door,
banging anything that passes thru. Can't wait for more.

This chapter was good don't worry I can't wait for the next chappy to come out.
Keep up the Great work! PAtiently waiting for the next chappy:-)

Wow, I had to read this chapter twice because I didn't
understand what was going on at first,
but then I kind of got it and I must say,
I am impressed, now I know
you wouldn't put Kagome in there unless she
had some purpose, right?
Yes, no, maybe so, Anyway I loved this chapter,
I just got annoyed because of all the cliff hangers
I mean argggg how could you leave it like that.
Please update soon

omg! how the hell can kouga do this. i was kinda confused on the kagome part,cause i forgot that she was even in the story and i still cant remember. And rin a sess i wonder what is going to happen between them. i cant wait for sess and rin and kouga ad ayame. so please update soon i am so interested to see what happens next. dont leave me hanging

i liked it...though i got a little confused since you hadn't been focusing on Kagome at all until now -- she was more like backround, if you know what i mean. anyway, i can't beleive you left all your minni parts at cliffhangers!! geh!! up date soon please!!

Thanks for e-mailing the last chappie to me. That chapter was terrific but yes you ARE digging yourself intop a bigger grave. You keep adding to the delemas. I love it though. As long as you finish the story. I was SOOO confused at the beginning of the chapter becasue I had forgotten it was Rin who was with Sesshomaru not Kagome. Anywho, that chapter was great and thanks again for e- mailing it to me.

After reading all nine chapters over, I could tell that you have gotten a lot better then when you first started the Fic., and I must admit, it has gotten a lot greater (the fic, and your writting)! Keep up the good work. =)

Not bad. I don't know if the first part was really needed though. Since when have InuYasha and Kagome have been important in this story? I understand Kouga and Ayame. I'm quiet interested in what's about to happen between Rin and Sesshy-sama. What would I do if Sesshy-sama was chasing me.....*thinks naughty*....hehehehehehehe a lot of fun things. He probably will have a hard time getting me. Well update soon can't wait to read what's going to happpen next!!!! EEEEEKKKKK! Ya got me squealing like a school girl again!! Please hurry and update!!!!!^w^