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by AJs

person GodsGift16
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing beginning. its excelent thar Sesshomaru is intriged but doesnt know whos behind his lust. continue QUICKLY!!!!!!!
person Moon Dog
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Flash Dance, school girl by day, dancer by night. HOT! Love it, update as soon as possible! Think of it this way, the sooner you update the sooner I'll review some more.
person DRAGON
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story. It good to see Rin making Sess hot under the caller. MUST have more. Keep it coming:)
person animegirl007
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like it....One question was she wearing a mask or something??? because shouldn't Sesshomaru know that she was a girl from his school???....I hope you are going to make her play hard to get......We can't let Sesshomaru win so easily all the time......update soon........I can't get enough Sess/Rin Stories
person CHIBIchibi
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story sooo much. Rin is so nice in this fic................. and Sesshomaru is soooo hot ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how could you just leave it like that update as soooooooooooooon as you can pleaseeeeeeeee. I neeeeed to know the rest of the story wahhhhhhhhhhhh update
person Saphira
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story....i like that song to...it came on the radio right after i read this chappy....coinkidink maybe?any way keep up the good work