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by AJs

person awaitingmymate
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great! Awesome! Continue, pleeeeeeeaze! (pant,pant.)
person DRAGON
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Son of a Gun!!:) That was a Great update. Liked seeing Sess work a little for what he wants. Nice seeing Jakan Thinking the same thing about letting Sess work for it. Keep it coming.
person animegirl007
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!! LOVE IT!!!. At first I thought he found her......you devil, it was a perfect dream....Jaken being nice, now that different from all the other stories where he is you know ...just Jaken. I can't wait until he realize that Rin or Sato is right before him at school...That should be a "VERY INTERESTING SCENE" ...I hope.. UPDATE SOON PLEAVE...I NEED IT!!!! BADLY!!!! GOOD JOB SO FAR!!!!!!
person chibified kitsunes
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
w00t!!! i can't believe i have never seen this fic before!!! for an AU fic, this is one hot and sizzling story between sess and rin!! i just love stories on them and yours is one of the best!

its not even the lemon yet and you already have me engrossed and staring at the screen. you had better update soon because i am just drooling for the next chapter.

sess is such a baka, rin is right in front of him but he cant even see her! hahaha, wonder what he would say when he finds out who she really is! XD

could you do me a big favor and email me when you next update this fic, because i don't come onto aff.net very often and i'm afraid i might miss out.. T.T puhwease??

and keep up the awesome work k?? ja!

luv chibi
person Erick
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was one of the greatest and most original fic I have read till now, I hope you update soon
person silent screams
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be one of my fav stories!!! UPDATE SOON PLZ.
person CHIBIchibi
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooooo00ooooooooooooo hohohoho I love Rin so much she's so funny and mischievous. Kagura is just plain evil and needs to die *silent screams in backround* Sesshomaru is so sexy and so dense and Jaken is my favorite person He's so cunning and sly. I love all the characters update soon *puppy dog eyes please*
person New Fan
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I thought that Sess was a bright guy. I guess in this fics he allow somthing so
simple and important slipped through the cracks. Update this story soon.
person lolita
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this seems entertaining. plz update soon.
---gypsy -___-x
person me
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
has amazing potental