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by AJs

person SesshoumarusMistress
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG awesome awesome story! you have to update this ASAFP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Loopy
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person xpotionnerd
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! Please write more. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the story line so far. Keep it up!!
person Sess\'sBewitchingBabe
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is more, more, MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person DarkLady
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay for good fan fic authors! i really like your fic keep updateing!
person Devon M
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was different. Never would have figured Sesshomoru to be that clueless, but I can suspend belief for this story. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
person lolita
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think i liked this chapter more than the last. it helped me kno the characters and i didnt hate the song as much. u've hooked me in, now give me more.
--gypsy -___-x
person Saggi
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You got to continue! This is the best Rin and Sessho fic Ive ever read!! The plot is a good one too!! I wonder what will happen when he finds out that Rins Sato..........hmmmmmmm.....well thats all up to you of course!!! Awsome story! Ja ne!
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it! It's got a certain spice to it that just makes it seductive, sexy and hot! Poor boy doesn't even know what hit him...but he wants it again and again and again. And I love how Jaken knows and is just waiting for realization to dawn. That's going to be hilarious!
person techempath1 (not signed in)
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! I love the way Sesshomaru is so dense he can't get it! Can't wait for more!