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w00t You've updated!!! >w< thought it was short, I still like. I never would've guessed that Ayame was pregnant?? O.O Shocker!!! Sorry o hear about your familyness. PLZ update as soon as u can. Me likes it very much. Sayonara!

-Chibi

Looks like everyone's having a little boy trouble. ^.^ Wow, I haven't been on for months. Sorry! Summer came and I sort of drifted away. I'm back! Though by the looks of it you aren't. Just my luck. Gidget, sounds like something I should check out. It's kinda cool having Moon Dog as an alias. People are always asking me if I got it from A, when I really just put 4 and p together. One person thought I was a fan of Moon Dog the band. o.O Never heard of them. Oh well. Another movie that mentions me, (I guess) is About Schmidt, with Jack Nicolsan. His daughter works for Moon Dog Electronics....I think. I know theres some connotation to my name in there somewhere....

I hope you haven't given up on this story. I just read the whole thing in one sitting I was glued...
Can't wait to see what you have planned next

Please, PLEASE update sooner. Please? I love this story!!! I want to know what happens next, hee hee, and the mystery between Kagome, Kikyo, Ayame and company, PLEASE!! ^_^

I liked the 'Ice Prince' detail you created with Sesshomaru, though my suggestion is that you should take it up a notch an make him more dominant and possessive! I wished you made Rin more innocent istead of the temptress you had here, she'd be cuter if she seemed more pure. Well, loved the story! Great Job on the ending for this chappie!

I haven't done this in a LONG while but I was recently recommended to read your story and I gotta say I loved, loved, loved, LOVED it. I simply could not put it down! I was up half the night before I had to literally force myself to go to sleep. WOW!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, I dying to know what will happen next! But I do have one question, is Ayame going to tell Kouga what she was hiding or is she just going to run away? And did Kogua really have feelings for Kagura? I would have never guessed......hmmm....(stares off into space)

Well that was quite a story, I'm glad I found it. I hope you update soon. (Just to help you out a little- You've been writing paragraphs where the reader is unable to tell who you are talking about for a while, it's cool to have those every now and then, but you have so many it is making the story very confusing.)

Please, please, please update soon!!!
I can't wait to read the next chapter!

when u going to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DON'T LET KAGURA AND KAUGA DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS AYAME AND KAUGA FOREVER!!!!!!!! PPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAASSSEEEE