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for Just Grind

by AJs

person Flor
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry but i wanted to sai that i CAN wait, no cant.
person elly18
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is sooooooooo good! please i wanna the next (whole) chapter very soon!! can't wait!
person Kagome_chan
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so frigging awesome cant wait to read more you should put more detail in it about sango miroku and inuyasha and kagome it would make it even cooler
person sessylover
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it u r really good i hope u write the next chapter keep writing its a great talent u have.
person IVY
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG your killin me here (lol) you left it like that again , i wonder how sessh would react when he ses her dancing
or how she will react i think we all knoe but probably youll surprise all of us.well i loved the chapter and i still think
you are a great great author keep up the good work and please update soon
person Daniela
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! that story was frikin awsome. u left me hangin i wanted 2 know if sesshomaru finalyy talks 2 rin or sato or wat ever. at the beggining u had me worried, i thought that little lemon was between rin n kouga (sweat dropps) ha ha ha. anyway it was really steamy n good.
person Kit
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I looove your stories!!! your quickly becoming one of my fav authors... this is one of the best fanfics I've read about Rin. Its so sexy... and Sess (falls off chair and drools in delight at his sexiness in the story)... Update soon!!
person DarkAngel
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you didn't give up on this story
person DarkAngel
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(sweat drops) hahaha I clicked the stupid review button and I wasn't even finished writing. What I meant to say was;

I'm glad you didn't give up on this story, 'cause it's too hot for you to give up on it. Sizzling, smoking, and steamy. Mre please *pouts*
person Daddy\'s Little Girl
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ano... *scratches head* I can't believe I didn't notice ths story before, especially because of the sexy plot line and because of all the reviews you got for only five chapters. You've got me hooked and I'm burning to know what's going to happen next, now GIVE. ME. MORE.