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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very seductive! This story caught me and I could not stop reading! You have captivated your audience which is a writer’s primary goal. Great job. I am excited to see how this turns out.
You totally threw me off, I thought Fluffy was going to accept her, but I am not complaining. I like being surprised and I am awaiting your next installment with much anticipation. What
will happen with Rin? How will Kagura get her revenge? See, you got me on the edge of me seat...don't let me fall!! :)
You totally threw me off, I thought Fluffy was going to accept her, but I am not complaining. I like being surprised and I am awaiting your next installment with much anticipation. What
will happen with Rin? How will Kagura get her revenge? See, you got me on the edge of me seat...don't let me fall!! :)
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow... She passed out. I want to hurt Sesshomaru...he's such an ass.
Come back with more soon
Come back with more soon
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg u have to continue it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesing idea, I have to admit. Very nice descriptions of the characters, and you are good keeping the emotions constant. Very enjoyable read, after I got over the fact that the woman was Rin. I personally prefer Kagura with Sesshoumaru since she is to be the only woman who has a fire to melt Sesshoumaru's heart of ice, but that might just be me *shrug*. However, I loved the mystery surrounding Sato, and how cryptic her words were. Good job. Maybe you would write a story with Kagura/Sesshoumaru? I look forward to reading your other stories.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did Rin fainted? Did Sess see 'Sato' Rin's performance? Will Sess be able to get Rin out of his heart? Update soon.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! Intense!!! We want more!!!!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo.... why do you always leave cruel cliffy's. Awesome chappy, by the way, but did you have to stop it here.... why, why, why, why? Okay I'm done with my rant now I want you to update, I want to know more
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ur story is sooo good!! Pls, pls, PLS update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter seriously made me cry. Sesshomaru is such a jerk, and Rin is so innocent. Why did you stop ti right there, I want to know what happens next. Please, please, pleaseeee update
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh... wow. This chapter was so sad and I'm glad that you finally made them meet. it was so good and so sad, but I lovd it. This chapter was totally aawesome, so much conflict... so little time. Can;t wait to read the next chapter