rate_review Reviews

Hey!!! This story is overall AWESOME!!! I am chewing my hands off just waiting for the next update...

I loved this. I like the concept though I am curious what will happen next. As for critique, I see a few typos and spelling errors here and there;p

Well, my 'bastard' comment from before still stands. Shesshomaru may be sweet sometimes, but he seems a little...unstableO.o Yeah, that's the word. Well, of all the costumes Shesshomaru had to fuck her in...it had to be the 'little miss mupphet' outfit-.-; I can't wait to see what happens next, though.

p.s. If Kikyo had asked Inuyasha to go to heaven, would you have felt differently? If Kikyo, a PRIESTESS of all people, goes to hell, who goes to heaven? I assume her taking him to hell would be just taking him to where he was gonna go anyway. Was that enough backsass for ya?

Please update soon! You are a true author! Your talent with writing will take you very far. :) I cant wait to see what happens next! So PLEASE update soon!




Ever Rin

i liked it . keep updating

YEAH!!!!!!!DR---AM-----A!!!!!!!! I knew you would make it good, but darn that was too good. I nearly had a heartache when Sesshomaru did that to Rin....I love him dearly but that was too cruel.. And okay, ~sniff...sniff~ since you won't break Kagura legs or arms...~sniff~I can live with her going insane. But, couldn't she going insane and break a leg???( I hate her so!!!)......I can't wait to see why Rin fainted, and how school is going to be when she goes back and see Sesshoamru in class( its nail bitting time).....update soon please!!!!!!!!!

Awwww!!!!!!!! How could he do her like that she loved him. Gave her virginity to him. She still do love him. Please make it right Please!!!!!!! I cried at the ending please another chapter......Please please please.........Please I want to see Sesshomaru and Sato umm Rin back together please!!!!!!!!!!!! Make your fans happy again....can't wait for the chapter 7......Please don't keep us waiting long.

I cried throughout this whole entire chapter. It was so sad. I want more, please, please, please update

Yeah, why did Rin faint it she pregnant or something.........Please make him suffer badly and make him come back to her on his hands and knees kissing her feet & begging for her forgiveness. I had to add that to what I had already wrote.....I would have done more than slap his ASS and told him off.....I would have whipped his ass like I was a demon or something crazy.....Please update soon can't wait.......

GRRR SESS IS BAD!!! I can't believe he did that too poor Rin! He was the one who was basically blind. Poor rin! It sucks that she fainted. I hope she gets revenge on Sess, he'll hopefully come crawling back.... can't wait for the next chapter.... please make it soon!!!!