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for Just Grind

by AJs

person Anon
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am anticipating the arrival of the next chappie... I am seriously dying here!!!
person Cassie
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story I can't wait for chapter 7 ... I check everyday to make sure I'm not missing the story.....Please update it soon...I can't take the suspense any longer don't let the fans down.
person Milzi7
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i seriously thought this chapter is awesome, as I said earlier! I really wanna know when the next one comes out, because I am HEARTBROKEN!!! Why doesn't Sesshoumaru tell Rin how he feels?!?!?! I mean, he is a jerk

RIGHT ON SCENTED CANDLES!!!!
:)
^^
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm are you just going to stop it there, I want to know what happens next, please, please, please update soon, Your killing me hear :::Gasps and then faints:::
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update asap. Don't wanna leave your readers hanging
person PixieDust
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Gasp:: That was so mean. Is Rin. . . pregnant?
person phoenix
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is absoutely great! well dun keep me waiting too long fer the next chap!!!update soon...
person Kitara
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I simply love your story, you must write more! Its very intersting how you describe each secne and each character it lets the reader use their own imagination but not so much where they have to wonder exactly whats what. Your very talented :) I hope to read more from you in the near furture
person EvilPand
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh! you take to longe to write a chap u got to write faster oo ya love the story
person loopypants
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are a excellent writer. Perfect detail and balance on the naughty scenes. Bravo!