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for Just Grind

by AJs

person vtchachi
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, anguish! Love how you pulled this chapter together. Dirty little fluffy and poor Rin.
I liked how you portrayed their suffering differently. Fluffy’s is more physical because he can not handle
emotions and Rins is more emotional that drains her physically. It fits their characterization well.. Boy, Fluffy is
really digging himself into a hole (is he taking lessons from my hubby, cause I thought he was the biggest hole
digger around...just kidding!). I hope Kouga kicks some sense into him.
BTW...I was reading some of the reviews and wow, I can not believe some people just beg for you to update!
I am like come on guys give her something to inspire her…come on now, it is the least we can do for her to keep her going and all!
Well, thanks for the great ride so far...
person Moon Dog
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, NO, NO! GODDAMNIT ALL TO HELL NO! KOUGA GET OFF YOU SEXY ASS AND KICKED SESSHOMARU'S! I DON'T GIVE A SHIT WHETHER YOU HIRE SOMEONE OR NOT TO DO IT, JUST GET IT FUCKING DONE! ALSO WHILE YOUR AT IT, WHY DON'T YOU HAVE SOMEONE RAPE HIM TOO! BEFORE A SIMPLE ASS KICKING WAS ALL THAT'S NEEDED, NOW ITS FUCKING WAR! *grabs pitchfork* LETS SEE NOW, WHERE CAN WE STICK THIS?!!!!!!!!!!!
person Inus_Kagome_Forever
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, thats sooo sad! I like have tears in my eyes, omg!!! Damn! Wow! I mean that was really really well written. GAWD, wow! That was good just omg! So sad. I thought he wasn't going to be with her again. I thought... ahh! Omg I'm so confused! YOu have to update soon! GAWD, OMG, OMG!!!

UPDATE SOON!!!
Inus_Kagome_Forever
person ChibiSamuraiX
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! I'm lovin' this story!! Please update soon!!!!
person animegirl007
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I couldn't write you a review for your teaser, because it sent me into cardic arrest!!!!!! The only thing I could say at the hospital was " Just Grind...the story Just Grind ...they only wrote a teaser instead of a chapter!!!!! ARGH!!!!! How could she do that ???!!!!! ARGH!!!!!!!!!" .....Don't do that again, I don't think my heart could take another shock like that one.......Now for the story.... Sesshomaru is back with Kagura?????? What is wrong with him???!!!!! and Rin felt betrayed because of her father's death.....I really like how you brought out that bit of information so we can see what's going on in her mind.....I can't wait to see what you have planned for them next!!!!!!! KEEP IT COMING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
person CHIBIchibi
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I decided to read some of your reviews before writing something and I agree with vtchachi, there are so many emotions going on, I absolutely love it, but what's going on with Ayame, what's her news, the news that she thinks she'll kill Kouga with? Please I am dying for another update, please do it when you can. I absolutely love your story, it means so much to me ^___^ And Kagura?!? With Sesshoumaru??!? Dear lord no!!! I love the way you write it is simply amazing. I look forward to the next chapter
person jem
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! Please update soon!!! ::begs:: please? take your time, though!!!
person KogasAngel
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!! Sesshomaru actually kissed Kagura?! EWWWWW. Great chapter. I can't wait for the next. I feel so bad for Rin, and Kouga.
person anime fan
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is one bitchy-evil cliffie to leave us all at! you realize this, dont u?! *glares* anywho, really really good chappie. haha, i refused to read the 'teaser' since i wanted to read it all at one sitting.
but great update...make the next one longer *gives puppy eyes* please?!

~Anime fan~
=^~.-^=
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! T_T
Please?! Please?! Please?! Please?! Pleeeeeaaaasssseeee!??!?!?