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for Just Grind

by AJs

person animelo
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW SAD! You should make him suffer! Not just Rin. Let him think she has moved on. Let him beg her, please. That would be soo classic. The proud being brought down. You are awesome. Please continue updating and these are only suggestions cause this is a great fic.
person Saphira
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grabs a sword and chases after Sesshoumaru* GET BACK HERE YOU BASTARD!!!!!!
Sesshoumaru: *runs for his life*
Me: anyway...great story keep it up..... AND UPDATE QUICKLY!!! *chases after Fluffy some more*
person Bookreader9999
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update!!!

Lisa

So many books, so little money.
person Sara
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh!!!! GOOD fic!!! I can't wait to read about what happened in Rin's past, and what will happen with Sesshoumaru - not to mention Kouga's reaction to Sess! O_O Very good story, plot and lots of angst! LOL! Update when you can!!!
person TricksterGoddess
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Rin... well I've always been told that things always get worse before they can get better... and that just sucks monkey butt. You better torture Sesshomaru to the point where he begs for death... mayby not TOO harsh, but somewhere along those lines. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work^__^!!!
person dark_Angel
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear you are evil for leaving it there...grrrr...More!!! and update soon! ~>.<~
person cassie
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! You updated! please continue with the updates
person Alena
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, just awesome. I absolutely love this story!!!!!!! Please update soon (if you're inspired of course ) ok, now that i got that out of the way....................................


THAT CHAPTER WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!!
O.o' ......ummm..........there will be another one, right? right? WELL?!?






...........................eh?....................fuck
person Ren
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon, love your story, it would be greatly appreciated if you will please continue it soon, arigato if you are working on the next chapter and is thinking about adding it. Tee hee hee, love the story and love your work, very detailed and at the same time, very impressive, I love it a lot, so please continue soon. ^_^ arigato again if you are reading this, matta ne until the next chapter.
person Tokoharu
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You keep doing it!! My heart is going out to Rin.....I feel her pain and her agony of having to return to school and see someone you've been with and you
love with someone else. Perhaps if their first encounter hadn't been so electrifying for the both of them, the situation wouldn't be so maddening now....
but then again I wouldn't be so entranced with the story if you didn't have the talent that you do. Your writing keeps amazing me, especially the character
development. I just want you to know how much your painstaking efforts on this fanfic are appreciated. I hang on every word and try to read the chapters
over and over again to squeeze out every luscious drop of angst, heartbreak, love and happiness that your characters are feeling. Love the protective
brother side of Kouga and the oh so slithery, slimy, and slutty side of Kagura. What's it gonna take for Sess to rid himself of her stench?
Can't wait to wrap myself up in another one of your chapters.