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that was the most sad and beutiful thing i have ever read i have tears in my eyes its like i can feel here pain.

I love it and hate it SO much! Oh gods I love this story, please hold your end when you say Sesshoumaru WILL

Sorry, sort of push the wrong buttons...tee hee hee, ^_^' oh wells, anyways, I hope Sesshoumaru WILL be begging, damn him and his denying self. I like his youkai side better, tee hee hee, I like his more animalistic side, it's ashame really when his human side don't have the right knowledge in a mate, oh wells, I hope he pays dearly for it. I once felt that way once, I had someone like that, like Rin was with her father, I was like that with my father...but that was a long time ago, unlike her also, my father was divorced by my mother for physically abusing her and my sisters and me. It hurted, I loved him even though he beated me, some how I was always able to understand for my family no matter what happened, even when I was that young.

When he left, I felt a part of me was taken away, and I think it was called...innocence, I then became more cruel, cold, and more calculating...I hated the way I am now, it's still that way. Only with my older sister is that different, she...is my one and only model to look up to now, I love her too...like my dad before, but she left me too. I am a type of person who will never be able to get into a really deep and emotional level of love with anyone but my family...I curse blood bonds to hell, when they are hurt I feel pain, that's why I admire Sesshoumaru so much, he able to hide it. I guess that's where I started stop crying, I admire his strength but his weakness is refusing to understand and look at other's perspective. It's ashame, if he did, maybe, then just maybe in this story to say in the least, he probably would have been a better person. Tee hee hee, I'm going to far now, I just wanted to say, I felt the same way before, even if I didn't show it, I always berate myself at night for my stupidity, always putting on my smiling face, caring to much for my family when one day they will leave me...just like my father.

I guess my father deserved it though, he cheated on my mother countless of times, there was times where I caught him and another woman together, of course being young as I was, I didn't know what was going on, but from what I learn in school, I had a good idea. My mother then started cheating on my father after that, I witnessed it all...I was...shattered. Though I always smiled, always...smiling...I guess I'm a fool. Then again it was for my family, if I broke down eveytime it happened, which was often, then they would have stopped their happiness for me. I guess I really am a baka desu....oh wells though. I just wanted to say, I love your story because I feel as though I can connect with it, I hope you continue your great story soon, I've been dieing to see what happened next. Tee hee hee, I hope you can get over the writer's block, what ever that is, sorry I don't know what that is...tee hee hee. I just hope you will continue it though, great chapter though it was old, it had more and that's what counts for me. ^_^ *geez there I go again, smiling* hope you continue soon, I want Sesshoumaru to grovel for what he did.

That pain he inflicted is not to be taken lightly, grrrr, I stopped eating and now STILL have trouble sleeping at night because of those old pains, I could only imagine what Rin is feeling, damn while he's at it, why don't he cut of his balls. Okay that was too cruel, but that's what he gets, asshole, but oh wells, I don't think would like that much ~_^. Well ta ja! Great story please, please continue, sorry for writing the other stupid stuff in my review, I really do feel connected to this story though.

Damn, that's so sad. Poor Rin! I wonder if Sesshomaru will see her run off and follow her to the grave. Anyways, i have enjoyed your story and i hope you will continue as soon as you can.

Once again another wonderful chapter! I cant wait till the next chap. it will be very interesting to see what Rin does.....and Sess........ I cant wait until you update! So plz update soon! Just Grind is my Fav story on AFF!!! And like ive said befoure, your talant for writing will take you far! Keep up the AWSOME work ^_^



~Ever Rin~

All I have to say is "Damn Good" story..... but why did Sesshomaru let that damn Kagura kiss him and why didn't he run after Rin when she ran away.... Is someone gonna beat Sesshomaru ass for what he done to Rin...making her feel like she do behind his ass. And is he ever gonna apologize to her for what he said and did to her. Make him suffer real good...the punk ass demon....

oh i almost forgot please another chapter.....u make me look like this ^_______^ after i read your fic.

Damn!

Damn!

DAMN!!!!!!

This chapter was great. Poor Rin and what's wrong with Ayame,
she was so... tearful. And what news is she afraid to tell Kouga?
Please, please, please update!

Woah, so much heartbreak, so much angst.

_Grins_ I love it!
This chapter was so sad, I hope you update soon, don't keep me waiting for too long...

Wow...I haven't read a part with that much suspense since....well since a long time. That was wonderful. Poor Rin, she's so mixed up. If Sess would just come out and tell her the truth...everything would be ok. Come back soon!