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nooooooo!!!!! why kouga, why?

Is Ayame pregnant??? Grrr I must know and what about Kouga and Kagura? That bitch has been with everyone in this fic. She's such a damn slut. Anyway, I loved this chapter, but I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next, please update!

Interesting!!!! Kouga and Kagura??????? And thank goodness for Sesshomaru's youaki side......At least it knows its mate when he see it.........it's getting just too good.....update soon....

YAY! You updated very quick double yay!! This was a very interesting chapter....But I loved it anyway! Oh my oh my it sounds like Ayame is pregnant.....could that be it? Muahahaha and it looks like Sess demon side is starting to take over..... Now what to make of this Kagura? And what is her history with Kouga? What was that she called him ---Lover---?! Is Kouga cheating on Ayame?! And what about my Fav character Rin? Will her father speak to her? Spirttualy? And will she ever Win Sesshomaru back? So many questions....perhaps the next chapie will give all of us (Reviewers) a hint of what is to happen......(Ya know it would be pretty funny if Rin started dateing another person, oh I can just see Sess rageing with jealousy...and if that person happened to be Naraku......Witch I have to say I have come across only a few Rin/naraku parrings....But I think it would Make Sess jealous to see Rin with a handsome and protective guy like naraku, but thats just me...tehe.... Well to make a long summary short, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!! You did a AWSOME job!!! Keep up the wonderful work! I am looking realy looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
~Ever Rin~
PS: Sorry for the spelling,its not my strong point.....

O.O Please tell me that Kouga has not been screwing with Kagura. She is like the skank from hell. Why would he go to her when he obviously loves Ayame? Please update quickly and I can't wait to see what you do next. Kagura, ewwwww.

YAY another chapter, Woo Hoo. Lover? Now where did that come from? Did Ayame find out about Kagura and Kouga, or my first thought was that she is pregnant. Will Sesshomaru find Rin in the cemetary? Ooh , so many unanswered questions.. Please update soon, and keep up the good work^__^!!!

Oh. my. GOD!!! 0__o I just figured that Kagura had something to do with another man in this story... just didn't know who...
WOW!!! I loved this chapter!! You can write some really good stories and I think that you should update soon! (LoL) now, you don't have to hurry, because the longer you take to write, the better the chapter is. So take all the time in the world!!!
Ja Ne!

Damn!!!!

Kagura has been everywhere, with Kouga, with Sesshoumaru.

With everyone, *shudders* gross.

This chapter was so good, please update soon,
I am dying to know what's going to happen next.
And what about Ayame, please!!! What is going on with her?

Oh...great cliffy. You got me on the edge of my seat again! Great chapter. You are really building up the
suspense with Ayame, I am dying to find out what she is keeping from him; however, sounds like he has some
confessing to do himself!
Great scene with Kagura and Fluffy! I had to laugh at that. She got what she deserved...but what is she planning,
sneaky. I feel for Rin, loved how you reflected her off Kouga’s eyes, nice touch! Beautifully descriptive, painted a
great picture for the reader, and for Rin!

BTW, great poem Ren! I hope everything gets better for you!

Great Chapter, I was surprised and totally excited when I got your email saying you updated! I was having a bad day
and you brightened it for me! Thanks!

wow...that was really quick!!