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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO! i've been waiting forever!!! please! please update. its such a great chapter!!!!!!!!!! wehhh! please!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was plain... awesome! i lik eit! im not sure how lemons can start with this one since theyre pretty young...
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its really good, you shoul dupdate quicker. later ;p
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! that was such a good 1st chapter! i honestly can't wait till ch.2! The way you write is so captvating and discriptive, i love it! i would like to find out how this fic is going to go along. like i said, can't wait till the 2nd chapter! if you have an e-mail list o notify people whenever you update, i would really appreciate if you e-mailed me at amperdue91@sbcglobal.net. wonderful beginning to a soon to be wonderful story!
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heh, that was pretty good. very descriptive, too...
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a very familiar fanfic.... a book, maybe?........
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, that was very well written. i could actually picture all those (gory) images and you really did upturn my stomach. i hoep you update soon, cha.
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fascinating fanfic! do continue please.
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This Fanfic is awesome so far!! but just a little suggestion, you might want to go back and check over your spelling and some of your sentences. But this fic is truly awesome! the plot line is original and interesting. Please update soon!
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such vivid imagery, it makes me wonder...