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Wonderful story! Please continue!

You are such a sweetie, YM! :) I really like how you went out of ur way to respond to reviews and that's so appreciated! I totally love your story, ALWAYS, and this chapter was HOT, not to mention very well scripted (as always)! LOL! Such sexual tension! It was a very good spicy chap and thanks for going out of ur way to post it up 'fore the big X-mas. My present for you will be to spread along the news of this story to all of my friends so you can get more adoring readers. Merry Christmakwanzahanukah! *Giggles* U are an awesome fanfic authoress. I will always cheer ur writings on--never doubt that. This reviewin' fic nut u won't lose as a loyal fan! Happy Holidays to ya:)

Oh, yes, I forgot to mention how this is a very treasured and beloved Christmas present. ^_^ Now, my birthday IS coming up on Januarary 3, so, you know, if you ever just feel like posting a chapter close to my birth date....maybe even dedicating it....(Whistles innocently) ~_^ :D That would be an excellent present. (Kid ^_^'s mind: It would be the best present EVER!!!!!!! Just like this one!!)

Happy holidays!

Until next time. :)

"Why spell Christmas with an "X"? It's just laziness I guess..." ;)

You surprise me. Right when I think that you can not out do yourself, you do it again! Unbelieveable chapter, chocked full of feelings, emotions, and actions. I think I need hospital rest after reading this chapter! Thoughts? I will start with, I was wondering why you did not take advantage of the initial bath scene when it was so full of potential . After reading the LIMON (spelling intentional), I understand now. You were saving up for later. During the preLIMON talk, you did a great job describing Kagome's insecurities regarding if she was InuYasha's "chosen one," and InuYasha's fears and jealousies regarding youkai Inuyasha's actions with Kagome since his human blood had been weakened. The subsequent lime was so good that I am renaming it a LIMON! One of my favorite parts (there are lots of them!) was, "You are mine, Kagome. Mine. You belong to me." Another one was, "I'll claim . . everything that you are . . ." A really great one was, "All of me, all of you, one." Very feeling and eloquent, I thought. And most hilarous, mixed with emotion, was, "Do something about that!/?" Ling MFAO helped me to remember to breathe! That important paragraph, where InuYasha was thinking, "could he," was very insightful, regarding his thoughts on his own personal "dark side" and the "dark hanyou," Naraku. The cliffhanger grand finale with dense Kouga was a cherry on top of the sundae. I can not compliment you enough. BRAVO! Thank you for always sharing with us and sorry for the long review. Cynbad146

Again, an absolutly wonderful chapter!!! I hope Kouga won't die... but I've gotta feeling Inu-chan's gonna beat the living shit out of him... I can't wait for more!!!! Whoop!

oh....my.....GOD!!!!! I think I just about died when I read this chapter...I love it, I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT!!!!!!! I really don't know how you do it...ack, I'm once again left speechless...but now I can at least die happy, because this chapter kicked ass (lime-y goodness and all!), AND you forgave my lazyness...I promised I would review again, and so here I am! And I will, forever and ever....tadaa!

I LOVE how you make the comparisons between all of Inuyasha's "halves"....it always leaves me in a state of profound astonishment...and your descriptions are lengendary...I actually feel like I'm watching everything that goes on (hentai parts included...hehe)

and THEN you add Kouga to the mix....AHHHHH *passes out and goes to her happy place*

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!

Oh please plase please pppppllllleeeeeeasssssseeeeee update soon. Does inuyasha kill kouge? I hope not. And is the chapter where inuyasha and kagome make love coming up soon?

I got a shout out! With Ramen! This almost makes up for the fact that i'm going to fail finals.
See, I have finals right now. I should NOT be reading a fanfic right now. i certainly not want to reread it (well, the smutty parts anyhow) because it was so great. But I am. Why? Because this chapter was great. I mean so many awesome aspects to this chapter:
"lady bush"- can I please use this phrase as a one shot? I have a whole huge scenario in my head now adn i want to write it. No, need to write it. I'll send you a link to it and dedicate it to you.....
that whole sexy, up-against-a-tree thing: dear lord. Very, very sexy. I mean, REALLY sexy. I hate the outdoors but I wnt to grab my local, tormented hanyou and introduce myself to the woods, you know? great scene. Scenes like that are what aff.net was made for.
And now Kouga is going to get his ass kicked! WHoo-Hoo!!!! hehe. very excited

What a hot chapter. I can't wait until your next update.

Merry Christmas to you too, and a happy 2006.

Chanda

*has little eyeball twitch going*..I don't leave reviews until I've read all the chapters that are up and when I finished this chapter I clicked to go to the next and realized there is NO other chapter :( WAAAAAAH! so NOT cool! please when you update e-mail me so I can glue myself to the monitor for hours on end yet again to further read this delightful sinfully HAWT story

Sincerly,
A fellow Author.
Angel