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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person Sachiko
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow . This story was better than I expected. And for English being your second language I say you're doing a wonderful job at it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
person Sílvia
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's great! you really know how to write! Only that I can't imagine Kagome being like in that dream... but it's a dream! I'm waiting for the next chapter, see you soon!! INU & KAG forever!
person animation_gurl
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best stories ive ever read! i think you did fine with the spelling and i cant wait till the next chapter!!! please e-mail me when the chapter is posted!!! thanx! o and read the two stories ive put up and review them! tell ur friends of my stories and tell them to review and tell me what you people think!
my first story is Secrets Hidden Beneth
my second story is Glass Lilies
R&R!
keep up the great work!


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person drake220
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really nice!! loved it!!! god, i loved the wet dream sequence. it was good!
person PJ
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far. I was able to follow everything pretty good. You write well. I am glad it is a Inu/Kagome fic otherwise I wouldn't be reading if it was a Inu/Kikyou fic. Keep writing update soon
person catt
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!U HAVE TO UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!Wow great start, and great work. Keep it up^_^
person Jordy
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! omg! poor Inuyasha!