rate_review Reviews

Horray! I finally caught up with the rest of the people reading this fic! YM, my comments in my previous review still stand, perhaps even more strongly than ever with appearence of Kouga and the further definition of Kagura. After I first reviewed, I went back and read the manga series again (well, as much as the local bookstore had, at any rate, since it sucks being poor), and I am still awed at how true to the characterizations you came.

Not quite a criticism, more of a personal pref though...I would like to see more done with Shippo. I loved the way you (quite literally) snuck him in there in this current chapter. That's the only real bad thing I have to say (and can you really even call that bad?)!

Until later!
:D

Oh my god, how could you leave such a cliff hanger?! This is the first time I read this story and I love it. I went back and read some of the previous reviews and all I can say is that if one does not enjoy a story then they do not have to read it. I'm also very glad that you take the time to go back and edit the mistakes out, because as a communications major who has been forced into many a English class, mistakes can be a bit more obvious if not more distracting to me than probably the average person. On that note....how dare you leave such a cliff hanger??!! lol, update soon!

dude!!! i bet Kouga's going to get his ass kicked!
i really like your story so far so keeeeeeep wriiiittttiiinnngggg!!!!
Pleeeeze!!!
you can tell i really really love it!!
and if anybody flames you....fuck em all to hell!!!

MAN THAT WAS GOOD. HATE THE CLIFFY LOVED THE CHAPTER :-) CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.

this story is just, wow. your stlye is so clean and you nail the characters. please update soon.

Hello!

Wonderful chapy again! You know, your limes always makes me want to have sex... And also the angst... I'm just sooo glad that you didn't sent them straight to bed... Love your fic!!!!!!!!! - goes to rape boyfriend...


Lynn

whoa.

very very whoa.

holy cow!! hot steamy goodness, one hell of a funny shippo moment, and poor miroku. i'll bet he almost had an anurism trying not to laugh.

now we're really in for it. poor koga's not gonna know what hit him.

you're awesome and fabulous and rock so hard it would hurt the state of wisconsin!!!!!!!!!!!

This story continues to enthrall and amaze. You've kept the characters so like themselves, and the reader can completely imagine the scenes you write. You're a very good writer. Very talented. I hope to see more of your work.

I am one of those guilty people who forget to review. But I just had to this time. This chapter was out of fucking control! *Thats a good thing*

I just knew he was gonna turn somewhere in this chapter. Please don't take away dark Inu so quickly in the next chapter. I love him. Please keep up the good writing too. It's a breath of fresh air then the other crap that has been floating around lately. *Opps, I'm gonna raise a few brows with that one huh? lol. Bring it on biatches!*

Hi I'm sorry I have not reviwed lately, I really like how the story is going and want to tell you to keep up the good work.