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i was pissed bout the whole kikyo thing but hey then it turns out it was nothin and i was pleased. i the fact that he actually pushed his over sized ego to the size and actually told kagome his feelings n.e. ways i like ur story plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice. Good writing skillz! A very good start! I don't know if you know this, but ... In one of the earlier episodes, InuYasha makes a point of saying that he cannot go with Kagome to see the Soul Piper because that is where "Humans are dragged into hell" ... which is why he can't go. I found this interesting. In the manga, he doesn't say that, but what he does say afterward does indicate the same, something along the lines of, "If you had gotten in trouble, I couldn't have saved you," to Kagome... Just an interesting point of reference. I psersonally don't think he ever promised he'd go to hell with Kikyou, and even if she had managed to drag him down there, I don't think they would have been together for eternity, either. Apparently hell is only a human place where youkai/hanyous cannot go.....

But back on your story, I very enjoyable! Keep it up!!

Good stuff! In regards the italics- to start the italics and at the end....hope this helps.

ok, let's try that again. < i > to start < / i > to end (without the spaces)

OMG! Don't leave me hanging like this....did they kiss??????????? ARGH!!! Update onegai!!

You're forgiven. Damn, you hate Kikyo alot, don't you? At a loss for words, will review again...

hmm, interesting... let's see how the next chapter plays out. Oh yes, thanks for the review on "Shiroi Inu, Kuroi Inu", i've added this story into my 'recommended reading' section on my profile. Hopefully i'll hear from you again!

OK, OK, so you really know how to slap on a cliffy. I'm enjoying this very much. Even if poor Inu my want to rip a certain peice of anatomy off for where it's been. Hope Kikyou goes off in a huff and *stays* that way for a bit.

Keep writing!

all i can say is....DAMN YOU HOW DARE YOU END IT LIKE THAT!!!I DEMAND YOU UPDATE AT ONCE!
P/S: love your story! ^-^

I really like how you're blending in very realistic emotional reactions on Inu's part with all the hentai imagery. I have to admit, my eyes just popped open at the idea of the resurrected Kikyo doing *anything* remotely sexual to Inuyasha. I've seen her depicted as lusting for Inuyasha before in other fics and have tended to roll my eyes at that. But if I was to believe it happening at any point, I would pick the way you set it up, though I still am laughing over how in life Kikyo may have stolen a hug or a kiss and in death she appears to have become quite the frisky chick. Does resurrection make one more horny? Hmmm.... :)
Of course I'm wondering just what in the hell possessed Inu to step out of the water buck naked and go to Kikyo. Was it a spell? He always seems to go a little cloudy when she's around...
But you've done a great job of presenting Inu's conflicting thoughts and emotions regarding Kikyo. In my opinion, that's the part that's the most important and yet almost the hardest to make sense of when writing fanfics. I mean, if it wasn't such a complex issue, we know Inu would be with Kagome!
At any rate, I'm looking forward to more. I know Kikyo is going to rear her bitter clay head sometime in the future. Afterall, she now knows that the one she's lusting for wants her reincarnation! Talk about woman scorned! And Kagome always is so vulnerable to whatever words Kikyo throws her away...ahh...
Well, I hope there's some good hentai Inu-Kag action to offset the angst I feel is coming up! :)