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Damn that was good, please keep it coming and let it just stay like that so what it does finally happen and they mate it would be an explosion of everything that they are. Just a thought! This story does so freaking rock *jumping up and down* and now cause of the story even though written by you I love the show even more now than before. *getting excited all over again*

I'm so glad my review made you feel better...but you have nothing to feel bad about! Every chapter I read just makes me admire your writing *that* much more! Your style is fluid and I love your use of ...; makes everything glide together. I was truly melting, absolutely turning into a puddle of goo as I read your description of the kiss. If that's the kind of lime you write then by all means, full steam ahead! Besides, as much as we all want a lemon between Inu-Kag, you've set up a scenario with characters that you can't rush into that with. I mean it would be strange to have our devastatingly handsome but up to now emotionally conflicted and sexually inexperienced hanyou decide to have wild youkai sex with innocent, virginal Kagome out of nowhere. Though many fics do that and it's just fine. I personally like the longer, drawn out approach. Much more gratifiying in the end...also more realistic :)

Regarding your comments about Kikyo...I totally agree with you! I think having Inuyasha turn human was definitely more to benefit her than him...as such, it was a selfish wish and who knows how the Jewel would've interpreted it? And you're right...it's implied that they would stay together as man and woman and have a family. The thing is, I just don't see the original Kikyo acknowledging or even acting upon a physical desire for a hanyou Inuyasha, given a miko tinged distrust of youkai and even the conventions of society at the time. A human Inuyasha would be a different story and would thus be fair game for settling down and creating the family and "normal life" she so badly wanted.

When I made that comment about resurrection making her horny...I was being a bit flip. :) But you make a great point - Kikyo version 2.0 (resurrected) has been freed by many of the rules that bound her in life. She's become more of an "ends justify the means" character (actions with Kagome and the jewel) ...even though she retains some of her initial traits (tendency to heal the injured and sick; kindness to children). Given that, it's plausible that Kikyo's earthy desires, which had been repressed during life, are now unleashed in the form of 2.0 -and in an extreme sort of way. Would be consistent with her being motivated by an irrational anger and desire for vengeance (both of which presumably were also repressed during her real existence).

Ok...enough of the blathering!

Write more soon! :)

Wow. Great great story. I love your way of writing - everything just...is so right. The part when Inuyasha confesses his love to Kagome in Chapter 4...I nearly cried, it was so beautiful. Hurry up and post the continuing (sp?) chapters! Not nice to leave a cliffhanger >_<

God dammit woman! why must you end it in such a manner!
p/s keep it up!

A nice, heated chapter.... wow... not much i can say except hopefully you'll update soon again, this fic is excellent and i was right to put it into my recommend reading section.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO DAT WAS SO EVIL! and i thought its a full lemon V_V so disappointed...by makin me happy ADD A NEW CHAPTER ASAP!!!! XDDDD and it was gettin SOOO GOOD TOO!

I thought your story is very beautifully written and wanted to make a suggestion. Here it is, maybe you can have a female demon try to come on to inuyasha so that we can see kagomes demon side come out.( I know shes not demon but she does look and sound scaring sometimes)*shutters at that thought* nothing will happen HE WILL NOT BE INTERESTED IN HER. But shes in heat and wants to be with him.( then something happens although I don't know what) His demon side comes out because of the smell of the heat but who does he go after because kagome and the female demon are both in heat. He starts to yell mine (while sticking his nose in the air to actually have the scent engulf him) but thats all he says. Now somehow the female demon has kagome in her grasps ( you write how) so he looks at them with lust and need in his eyes only the female thinks hes looking at her not kagome since shes a full demon and not a weak human like her. So she laughs at kagome who's still in her arms and kagome is confused and hurt. He looks at them still yelling mine. Then the female whispers in her ear something a long the line of " You a mere human can never do what a female demon like me can do and that is to satisfy a powerful demon like inuyasha." Of course him having great hearing he hears that and only angers him even more * who knew that was possible* After she says that she starts to cry and thinks Can this be true? He lungs at them with his blinding speed and then the female demon throws kagome hard (shes still awake though) and turns around to entice him with her behind only to feel the wind past her and him going to kagome yelling mine. Grabs her and then leaps into the forest leaving the female demon behind and really angry. She will get him she says. We both know that's not true though. Although he doesn't hurt kagome and nothing happens as of yet or maybe it does *smiles evilly* but he some how ends up going back to normal of course it's totally up to you.


To me that tells kagome not only does his human side wants, needs and loves her but also his demon side. Both sides that make up our little inuyasha. The inuyasha she loves with everything in her. Maybe you can even have kagome kill the female demon later or not for trying to do anything with her MATE!! (As I have stated kagome has a temper) Then that can turn him in hotter for her cause he sees that she will fight and maybe even kill if anyone tries anything with inuyasha. (Kagome shouldn't always cry and be weak, have her fight for her man, her BITCH)

I think that will bring your story to new and interesting heights. Especially when it comes time for them to mate. The explosion will be unbelievable. I hope you consider this. You wanted an idea so here it is. But you can only use it if I get some credit for it. (just kidding) *gos to the corner and cries uncontrollably* *please gave me credit if you use it*
I hope you like it, please let me know. sorry it's so long.

OMG!!! i love you...although i was about to pull my knife out on you in the last chapter*growls*, but its ok now. your now one of my new favorit writers! i rank you up there with sueric. becaause she is so awsome...so i guess that makes you awsome to. so happy dance for you!!!omg!!i just rymed!!>.<;;...sorry, im a bit retarded sometimes.

woa who won did inuyasha win or did his demon side??? great update hope to read more soon!!!!!!!!

You must update faster.... I hate cliffhangers... I would say what I thought of your story, but I am at a complete loss of adjectives. But look at it this way- people only review chappies once, so more chapters = more reviews! I think...