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i loved ch 6! i can't wait till your next update! ...and lemon! :D

::gasp:: i feel so loved!although you made me role of the bed when inuyasha told kagome to forget about everything...::glare:: but its ok , i still love you ^^ and MERRY NEWYEAR!! i mean happy newyear...i think...

Hi,

Just found your fic and I Love it, I can't wait to read whatelse you write. Even though I"m not a Kikyou lover that chapter sure did add a lot of complications to the story, complicatios I'm sure inu and kags will confront. Is there anyway I can get notices of updates? i"m not too familiar with how AFF.net works yet.

thanks for writing and keep up the good work!

so what happens does he tell kagome how he feels or what?

Totally loving this story...I like how you have Kikyou as more of a victim than some evil bitch like most people...it wasn't her fault that she was tricked and killed and brought back from the dead! I don't like her either...but someone has to be the sexual antagonist in the story. Can't wait for you to update!

What can I say ... but ... WOW! WOW! WOW!

Theres nothing wrong with this chapter everything in it's right place. STOP DOUBTING YOURSELF AS A WRITER. I'M A BIG FAN!! Keep putting the chapters up. Happy new year. Heres to the next great year and to the next great chapters!! God Bless!!

please do a lemon chapter.

p.s. love your story.

VERY good chapter, i don't know why you would think something is wrong with it, it's good! It pieces things together nicely and all that... As for suggestions on what might happen in the future, i'll send you an Email about that soon, update soon and happy new year!

Your last 2 chapters have sealed the deal if there was ever any doubt (and there wasn't in my mind!) about your ability to depict the complexity of a character's emotions. Ch 5 in particular just floored me. It's actually very creepy - I'm currently working on an update to one of my fics where Inu breaks down his feelings for Kagome...when he first realized he was in love with her etc. And a lot of what I had put in my draft is what you've written. Of course the details and the phrasing differ but the set up is eerily similar. Sigh...this means I have to rethink what I'm writing :)

Truly, these past 2 chapters are terrifically worded and highlight the different levels of thoughts and emotions that poor Inuyasha is dealing with regarding his feelings for the two mikos in his life.

Unlike many fics that depict Inu as having knee-jerk responses to and simplistic assumptions about the various events that befall him, you have really given him a depth...a credibility. He wants so much, cares so much...and yet there's so much standing in the way of him actually having a relationship with Kagome.

And I am growing really curious about what Kagome's eventual reaction to what happened b/w him and Kikyo will be. We all know she will find out. The manner in which she does will make a huge difference - smug Kikyo throwing it in Kag's face vs. mortified Inu telling her the truth. Hm...why do I think it might be the former?

At any rate...excellent writing...excellent characterization. Keep it up.
And feel free to email me :)