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great story! i love it! lol my favorite on this whole website.i hope Inuyashas gonna be ok. well post again soon and ill review ;)

Kudos again on another great chapter. I can't wait to know how Inuyasha manages to control his youkai. I hope that he can, but I will leave that up to you. Once again, your story was AMAZING. Please keep up the good work and update soon, I check every afternoon for it, so don't disappoint us. lol. Thanks for considering my offer, and I hope to read the next chapter soon! Much love and ramen!

Always a big fan,
Psycho Koneko ~_-

Oh my gosh...THANK YOU for your wonderful words of praise and for the "plug". Really, it's too much and you are too kind. :) You *know* that I just love your writing...and the fact that you seem to enjoy mine, well that in and of itself makes me happy. What I love about this chapter and about your story overall is that you delve so well into the characters' thoughts and feelings. You don't leave things one-dimensional. The push-pull of Inu-Kag's relationship is one that many of us write about since the dynamic exists in the anime and the manga: they get close only to have one of them freak out/feel guilty/feel unworthy and then try to distance themself from the other. The way you set up the scenes conveys so much of that tension without you having to specifically describe it. You did a great job of the whole conversation that Inu-Kag have immediately after Inu pulls away from the kiss...and by extension what happens in front of the rest of the gang with Inuyasha trying to *get* Kagome to leave. I thought your campsite dialogue was great! Miroku the pervert always catches on quickly when there's a hint of action and he really doesn't seem to be able to keep his mouth shut, does he? Sango is always so strong...so caring about Kagome's happiness. And then there's cute little Shippo who really wants to make sure that everyone in his makeshift family is happy and stays together.

I'm very excited about the next chapter because you've given us some wonderful possibilities for the way things might proceed. Hmm...wise yet cowardly Myoga...I wonder what "pearls of wisdom" he'll be able to offer?

I keep thinking that the resurrected Kikyou is waiting to rear her head and tell Kagome what happened (I'd imagine that her version would be very edited...she'd leave out the fact that Inu called Kag's name) by the river. Eww....I feel icky just thinking about it!

You're doing a great job...so please don't doubt yourself. I still can't get over how you write so beautifully in English...considering it's a second language for you.

:)

poor Inuyasha, so confuzzled...but i will wait for your lemony goodness.oh, and do you think i can borrow Inuyasha for a night???I really want to break in my new hand cuffs...

Hehehehe, thanks for the credits and words of praising... just remember what i said in those Emails, no matter what sort of writer's blocks you have, i'll help you.

Okay, now for the review: You handled that camp scene with skill! I wouldn't have been able to come up with something like that. Also, it seems like the ideas i gave you are starting to flourish huh? Keep it up, even if i sent you those ideas, i'm more than eager to see how you play them out, VERY much more than eager... hehehe. Update soon again, this chapter ruled.

Wow, I am a really big fan of your story, I can hardly beleive that this is your first fic, you are as good as a veteran writer. I am loving the story line, and I just read all your chappies in one sitting because they are that addictive. I hope you can come out w/ the next chappie soon though, I am dying to know what happens next. I have always been a big fan of mushy inu/kags stories, and yours is the best I have read so far. I wanted to flame at you a tinie tiny bit when the kikyo scene happened, but I trusted you, I am just anxious about what Kagome's reaction will be when Inu tells her, I trust you won't disappoint though. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!! I mean it. I am not much of a fanfic writer myself, but I could give you a few ideas if you wanted. Just let me know. Can't wait to read more stories from you. Get the next chappie out asap, onegai!

Ja ne! Arigatou for the great read!
Psycho Koneko

luvd it plz update soon

its good, keep it up

i luvd it plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'll tell ya what's wrong! Too much unsatisfied sexual tension! Kagome creamed her panties and she barely even got started! *cough* Someone has an unsatisfied libido... I think Inuyasha's overworrying about how badly Kagome will react, although she definitely won't take it lying down. That girl seems more forgiving than Jesus, for crying out loud. Can't wait to see your next chappy!