rate_review Reviews

So far I have only read the first chapter. However I think it is very well written. I am looking forward to reading the other chapters when I get a chance to read them. So please keep up the good work.

Ja ne!

Tainted InuShemeeko

felicitacioes!!! estas haciendo un fic espectacular! muy bien descrito. tienes un manejo dl ingles envidiable :) y te felicicto por eso! espero que actualices uy pronto!!!! es muy genial conocer a otra autora latina! ^^ io soy d chile jeje ^^ nos vmos! y por favor no nos hagas esperar tanto1

i luvd it great update but where the hell is myouga????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey, nice work! I like how you use examples from the anime to explain inuyasha's feelings. some people just describe Inu's emotions and don't qualify their explanation with moments from the cartoon. Now, that's not a crime, but I definately think it adds something to explain those moments. Thanks for your review on my story, by the by.
Write more soon!
~MD

You're doing a great job both with Inuyasha and Kikyo's relationship the way it should be despite your feelings on the matter. I hate her too but I hate it when people make Inuyasha hate her or make her evil in ways she isn't in the seris( in spite of this fairly mature speech I still ocansionally bite the side of my computer when I see a serious Inu/Kik story). And she's pretty evil in the seris. Also your grammar and spelling are great(much better than my Spanish) and I'm pretty good at that kind of thing. Thank you so much for writing such a good story. Now I'm off to read the rest!

please update soon!

poor inu, talk about sexual tension...but at least i got good use of my fuzzy red handcuffs!!thank you so much!! i really liked that chapter, it was so awsome. you rock so hard!!! i freakin love you!! i guess i have to give you back inuyasha now...*tears* im gonna miss him so much!!

Wow... that scene and all that happened in this chapter... just simply, wow. You really gave that personality idea i suggested a lot of thought didn't you? The results were simply magnificent! To be truthful i was a bit suspicious if i gave that idea of Inuyasha's split personality to the right person but seeing as how you made it happen, my worries are blown away for good, you were the right person and to be truthful, you surpassed my expectations! Congratulations, you impressed me to the core.

Also, on the Lime scene, that was SO hot! If the lime is this good, i can't wait to see what the LEMON is all about... like, if these limes of yours are this good, can't wait to see what the main course is all about, heh, your style is excellent...

Oh yeah, thank for the review on "Time Soul Exodus", i'm glad your enjoying it's beginning, just wait until you read further, your in for a story unlike any other... well, with the exception of "Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past", THAT one is unlike anything, i swear, that fic is the one i'm pouring the most intensest plots i've ever cooked up. Well, hopefully i'll hear from you soon and i would wish you good luck, but seeing as how skilled you are, you won't need it, your skill alone is more than enough.

Jes- very well done chapter! I liked the interlude with Shippo- that'll go far with Kagome and if he wins over the kit, perhaps the runt will give them some time alone...Nicely discriptive lime- sweet but also in character, taking Inu's various sides into account. The transformation scenes seemed a bit rushed, but, hey, we were working towards the lime, which wasn't rushed at all, so you're forgiven. I wonder where Myoga ran off to....
Jen D.

this is a great story have going on here! please update soon :D