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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person lere
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Confuse me???? No, NO!!!! It's the best master evil plan I ever read about. Very smart. Pure Naraku.
I think now your fic have a new face to me. I was reading since the first chapter just to see some lemons. But now I'm very happy with this new turn. Fantastic! Congratulations!

Big hugs from Brazil,
Lere.
person sexykagome03
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! What a great story!!! ^__^ I can't wait for your update!!!
person Anne
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooo, ilove this fanfiction!!!!!!! please update soon. will inuyasha tell kagome the true? will she forive him if he does? when when they make love to one another? please please please ppppppplllllleeeeeeaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOO very very nice this is definatly one of the best lemonly lime stories I have ever read. Makes me all warm and tingly it took me a long time to finish this story because I kept drifting off in my head to day dream.*sigh* I have always liked it when people took the time to have Inuyasha take a rest at 2nd and 3rd base instead of always sliding for the home plate every single time. I'm almost more a lime than lemon person but good limes that lead into great lemons are the very very best. You are doing a great job I like the internal monologing of Inuyasha and thank you for having Kagome tell him he's beautiful. I don't think that's a popular thing but he sure could use hearing it as he's probaly heard all his life what a freak he was. Keep up the great work darling you're doing great. By the way how long before the night of the new moon that would solve some problems^_^
person blossom
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow your writing is so good please update
person drklazarus
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure how you could need reviews when you have such a KICK-ASS STORY! I swear, I've seen the plot used before, but no one has been able to pull it off so masterfully. You need anything, help encouragment, feel free to drop me a line. It'd be a tradgedy to see you stop this story because you weren't getting any feedback. I just read the whole thing in one marathon session (about two hours) and I wish there was more. You write the lime and lemon scenes so well, they blend effortlessly with the plot, and the characters don't seem out of place and personality ever. Inuyasha's boundless love, and equally strong self-loathing and confusion is so in line with what we've seen in the series.

I think I've rambled enough, so, here's hoping to see the next chapter ASAP!

~Lazarus
person Sandro666
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! YOUR STORY KICKS ASS! UPDATE!
person rawben
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!! i really liked ch 9!! update again soon!! and what's w/ the title? what does that have to do w/ the story?
person Miranda
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know how to make someone wait for another good chapter.
person Psycho Koneko
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are just on a roll girl, your story gets better with every chapter. I can't wait to find out what Shippou is up to. I trust you will find a way for Inuyasha to tell Kagome about his incident w/ Kikyou. I know this review might end up a little short, but reading your great fanfic and some others has inspired me to write my own. But, being the devoted fan that I am, I checked today and sure enough, you had updated. And ofcourse I had to review, you are just so full of great ideas for this story, and you capture the charachters personalities and their mind sets so WELL. I may be calling on you for help soon. Keep up the great work and don't give up, everyone has writer's block every now and then, HECK, I have had it for almost a year now. So wish me luck as well on my newest fic since last year! Onegai & Arigatou! Love your stories, and would you mind if I borrowed Inu for a while, I might need some "hands on" inspiration from him. *blushes slightly*

With much love and ramen (and pocky),
Psycho Koneko