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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person baku
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! great evil chappy.damn naraku and kikiyo...i guess i'll just have to go after them with a butcher knife!!!mwahahaha!!!uhm...ahem,yeah.i guess i can share inuyasha*pouts*...you rock so friggin hard, so here's some pocky, ramen, and lifesize inuyasha and sessy dolls!!
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the very best IY fics I've ever read. The story concept is terrific and imaginative. Your vocabulary and grammar are VERY impressive for a non-native English speaker; if you hadn't pointed it out yourself, I wouldn't have guessed it.

So you're Argentinian, huh? In that case...¡espero que continúes muy pronto!
person Psycho Koneko
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this chapter was a *little* confusing.....but I can also see where you would go with this. It is great that you are co-writing.....and I definatly can't wait to read that story as well.....because I have read works from both, so I am putting you two up to high standards here, don't dissapoint ok?! (I know you won't) Naraku is as evil as always, and your depiction of Kagura gives an inside look to her true self that most people don't notice. Great job once angain, and I promise I will return inu soon....::glances over at the handcuffed silver-haired hanyou on the bed:: but I am having SO much fun w/ him! lol! I was hoping to ask you a favor, and if you are to busy I totally understand, but I will be going out of town this weekend, and I wondered if you would consider reviewing my fanfiction (or what I have of one so far) please e-mail me and let me know if you would do that for me! onegai....I only check my hotmail so you can reach me there. On your chapter though, it was shorter than usual, or so it seemed to me, but I understand how writer's block gets, and I believe you pulled out of it very well. As usual, I can't wait to read your next chapter, and keep up the great work. Aishiteru yoyokagirinaku if you update SOON! lol.....no rush though. hope to hear from you.

And as always, Much Much love, ramen, and pocky!
Psycho Koneko
person battousai69
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Inuyasha fic I have read. The lime is so HOT I can't even think about a lemon. The fic is great because it has an awesome story as well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Zelix
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whooo, now THAT was one excellent chapter! No, it didn't confuse me one bit, it's the opposite: Now it all makes sense, the sudden feelings, all that happened... that was something i had not expected, i honestly hadn't, this chapter gave so many answers and gave this fic a very nice, excellent depth... all i can say is you rock da house, hope to hear from you soon!
person kagome1312
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so naraku is the cause of inu's change??????poor old pathetic dead walkin pot of clay she cant hav inu she knos it deep inside but she wont accept it!!!!!!!! i hope nothin bad happens between inu n kag!!! plz update soon!!!!! i like ur story!!! al dough it disgustes me the thought of kik wantin 2 pleasure inu!!!!!!
person foxfire730
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naraku is so so so EVIL!!!! (no duh...) maybe kagura could help inuyasha with his predicament?.. ya never know!!!! update soon! can't wait till next chapter! oh! and also it was good that tyou put this chapter down, because it has/will explain a lot
person Vadimirin
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I cant wait for the enevitable lemon in your story, because just reading your lime was better than alot of authors Lemons!
person scherezade
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! You cleared up my timeline confusion! :) I was initially thinking that my little brain couldn't handle the complexity of Naraku's spell and manipulations. Evil Naraku...evil Naraku! Gargh!

Good grief...I'm utterly embarassed by your praise. (Psst...when am I supposed to pay you?) Seriously, you had everything there...I just had a few suggestions to make...questions to ask.

:)

Oohh..can't wait to see what happens in the village once Naraku's major lust spell goes into effect!
person Pan
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope your not going to make Kagome mate with that evil creep. Like I said he's evil, and this story will truly creep me out and make me cry if you do that. Please don't do that if you at least have some feeling for this humble reviwer....T__T Of Love and Joy