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Another fantastic chapter done! Just so you know it, your story is one of my very favorites.
Have fun on your travel and when your back, write more!

Lynn

STILL SOOO AWESOME!!! I loved this chapter but *sniffle* Miroku almost got killed, Inuyasha was purified, and Kagome was scared. But I'm confident that the next chapter will be interesting. I wonder what Kikyo will do to Inuyasha? *head throbs* I need pocky.... Always great! Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, btw, I'm glad you thank everyone who reviews. Thats quite sweet of you! I haven't seen someone thank everyone who reviews so thats awesome. And I do read your author's notes. *wink* *large box full of pocky and ramen for you!* :)

Okay damn it you made me cry at this chapter, LOL

such a sweet moment between Inu and Kagome...well, as sweet as they can get while still yelling at each other....and then Kouga had to go and show up and ruin everything! *sniffles*

Then finally Inu confesses what happened with the cold hearted bitch *coughKikyoucough*....not to Kagome, but he confesses it none the less.... *wails*

Please give our poor hanyou a break! *sniffles* I'm hoping his human blood will strengthen maybe just a little bit from his confession? *hopeful puppy dog eyes*

I never thought I'd ask this, much less beg for it....but any way you can squeeze in a fluffly inu/kag scene? I'd prefer the fluff while he's hanyou, but...well...I'll take anything I can get....this chapter was so heartbreaking, I really think inu/kag need a little fluff. *gives puppydog eyes again*

No update until Febuary ? *sniffles*

*glances at calendar*

*waits (im)patiently*

Hope you have a wonderful vacation!

~Kia

HI HI ITS ME HINAMI! sorry i been like all over teh place but not aff...some how i forgot about aff...

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.....YEH WELL I CAME HERE TO SAY I STILL READIN UR FICS AND THEY ARE TEH BEST! ESPECIALLY THE RECENT ONES! raaah cant get enough of how great it is..

-oh and srry fOR the random name ive been watching too much invader zim...I KNOW I NEED TO GROW UP!!

AAAAAAAAHHHHHH! THANK YOU SO MUCH! This chapter was DEDICATED to ME! YES, ME, the geeky loser Kid ^_^!!! Psh, the arrival is fine, (you updated the day after Dog Skin!!! Isn't this week just Awesome?!!? :D) you were only, oh, fifteen days late. ;) I'm kidding. It is VERY much appreciated, as I'm sure you can tell. Just for this, I'm gonna review And sing a song: "Kappei Kappei Birthday, from all of you to me. And if I get lucky, he can do me in a tree." Ah ha ha ha. I made that. Yup, I sure did. ;)

Gasp! I read your lovely AN's! :O They make me sooo happy (not to mention envious of other great reviewers. Pout pout...). Your responses are so heartwarming, and they put such a big smile on my face. :) Just like when I read the AN's today.

I don't think it was so much that we wanted to see Kouga get his ass kicked, more like we just wanted another oppourtunity to see the sexy, wild wolf get in another brawl with the equally sexy, hot inu hanyou. ^_^ :D XD I suck at writing action sequences. >< XD Uhhh uh...full youkai Inuyasha...Uhm, excuse me, I have to go to the bathroom. :) Ha ha ha. Awwww, poor baby Miroku! I'D cuddle the perverted houshi boy. :)

To say the least, this chapter was very..powerful to me. For some reason I can never completely describe things the way I feel in reviews. I end up mostly using the same words a lot, (this annoys me constantly ><) and my feelings towards the chapter don't come out as strong as I'd like them to. So. I'm not too sure what else to say, but thanks, I now have a wonderfully talented chapter dedicated to me. I never thought that would happen. I'd give you something in return, but alas, I am not the most gifted person in the world.

Oh! I should mention, the Chapter 23 got me in a mood to get a story out there! :D I know, I hate self-promoting in reviews and I feel terribly selfish (I did this with Dog Skin as well, and I felt so bad and selfish!), but if you have the smallest amount of free time, would you mind...checking it out? In a way, it is dedicated to chapter twenty-three so... Sigh. It's just a small drabble that I wrote the night I read Chapter 23 on deviantART and MediaMiner (I prefer MM to view it, dA didn't work as well). It is called Runny Nose, and my pen name is Child Xylia (MM, for dA it's ChildXylia). Thank you! It would mean a lot to me! But, by no means do you have to read it on your vacation. Uh uh. No way in hell. It'd be a waste. -_-

Oh, I like cobalt too! :D It's one of my favourite words for a colour (Seriously. It just looks so...cool in writing. And the actual colour is very pretty.). Hee hee, have fun on your break! ^_^ Until February! Have a happy Valentine's day if we don't see you until then.

Farewell,
Kid ^_^ and/or Child Xylia

12:45 AM, January 19, 2006.

::whistles:: damn..!! That was one hell of an action sequence you wrote! It was wonderfully descriptive and your fully youkai Inuyasha gave me the shivers. Loved him. Also, kudos on Kagome's screaming reaction. There were no repitition of phrases that I could see which I found (1) extremely impressive and (2) a miracle in a scream monolouge. you could feel her desperation and i think it was really well done.
this chapter was fantastic. You got in the angst, the violence and the humor (Miroku is the greatest fall man of all time. Need a laugh? Beat up Miroku.)
Enjoy your trip!
(and I did fine on finals, thank god! thanks for the cheerleading.)

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! Go action-packed goodness! This chapter was NUTS! I LOVED IT! haha, like always! mmm....wolf blood...tastes....good...*cough**cough*.....I feel like running around the room chasing my non-existent tail because this chapter kicked some Kouga/Miroku ass (well...some Miroku 'neck'...) mwahaha! Kagome and her powers were TOO COOL! The visualization was awesome!
Was I ever happy to find that my FAVOURITE story had been updated! And, you NEVER dissappoint! (man, does it feel like I put too much pressure on you or what? haha) Every chapter is always amazing...I can't get enough!
And yes, I did promise I'd review FOREVER AND EVER...so here I am, once again...as another day passes and we take another step forward towards 'forever'.....
THANKS AGAIN for ALL your hard work!

I love this story... I can find absolutely nothing wrong with it, and that is rare for me... despite going remarkabley slow, every chapter hads it's purpose... and, as usual, I cannot think straight, so you'll have to forgive the pointless review. Will be checking back every day to see if you've updated, you can count on that, so you will be hearing from me again.

Please, for the love of all that is holy, please update!

Being a writer myself, I know how difficult it can be some times...

*whimpers* but your killing me! Your story is so wonderful, I've been reduced to tears quite a few times, laughed, hated Kikyou and Naraku with a passion and cheered for Kagura and Sesshouramu to get together (even though that wasn't a paring I hadn't thought of before).

I howled in frustration when I realized that the story wasn't finished. It's my own fault really, I should have checked to make sure it was finished, cause I hate WIP's. No offense, but I've learned that it really breaks my heart to get involved in a fabulous story, only to find that it isn't finished yet. I'm not blaming you of course, It was my own stupid fault for not checking, but.....Gah! *whimpers in frustration*

You're a fabulous writer, and you've kept all the Characters miraculously IC, true to the show. Including Kagome and Inuyasha's extremely frustrating ability to mis-understand each other and piss each other off at the drop of a hat, LOL! Your style of writing has made it incredibly easy to picture what is happening in the scene, as if it were really happening on the anime.

And I am infinately glad to find a story that isn't just all about the Lemon. Don't get me wrong, I'm not opposed to it, hehe, on the contrary infact. But a great plot, fantastic writing and such clear character vizualization make the Lemon all the more worth it. Think of it as the cherry on the banana split, if you will. ;)

Please please please continue writing this. I can't wait to read more.

I am both looking forward to, and dreading the time when this fantastic story ends.

~Kia

This is an awesome story! One of my favorites! I'm really interested in how InuYasha will tell Kagome about Kikyou... unless some does it for him... My only complaint is you take too long to update! LoL Though I really can't complain because I take FOREVER to update mine and they are not nearly as long as yours. Well keep writing I am looking forward to your craft of words!