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I've never watched much inuyasha or even read any fanfiction about the cartoon before but your story drew me in. I could cleary understand the characters (even if i had only seen them once before) and the storyline is intelligent, moving, and sexy. Keep those chapters coming. And BTW, I love the fact that you write long chapters, they resemble real scripts instead of ramblings.

Heee! Yes! MAKE KIKYO SUFFER!!!!!! HAH A HAH A!!!!!!!!!!! gO NARAKU! (for now anyway) 2 POINTS FOR KIKYO'S SUFFERING!!!!!!!!! And MIroku.....i suggested ya keep your mouth SHUT!!!!! Ya don't wanna deal with an angry confused inu do ya?? GO GO GO! This fic is awesome!!! BUT WHERE ARE THE EVIL EXPLODING RICEBALLS?????? he he he.

....MeOw...kiddding

The BEST fic I had ever read! Continue pls! Hi from Russian sport dancer!

YAY!!! I'm so happy you updated! Another excellent chappie though you had felt it slow. It gave a lot of incite into the mind of our dear hanyou and is building up to whatever the sinister Naraku has planned. Oh and that little girl who was hugging Inuyasha's knees was just adorable. Poor Inu was so flustered by it. SO CUTE! And I love how portray Kagura. Kagura has always been one of my favorite characters, I love her defiance and how strongly she desires to do her own thing. And I love her thoughts on the "scary clay witch stinking up the place." HA! That's exactly what I think of Kikyo too! Oh I can't wait, please update soon...what's gonna happen on the night of the New Moon? What does Inuyasha have to do to confront his weakened blood? Oh ::wails:: the suspence, I can't take it!!

This is an awesome story. It has all the right elements to have readers begging for more. Lol, me included. Great job with this. Please hurry up and continue. -Amanda

HAHAHAHAHAH!!! Yeah, yeah! I'm getting ready for the carnaval. It will be next week and I can't wait. I don't live in Rio de Janeiro or the north where people dances for four days @ @. But I'll enjoy the hollydays. And thank you for your coments about my country. I love Brazil and I'm happy when people from other countries say as much. Thank you again.

Oh! Now about the story. Well, I can't wait to see what will happen in his human night. And how about the "new" Kikyo??? I'm biting my nails here!!!! I hope to see what Kagome will think about the situation soon.

I'm a hentai lover too, but I like stories with plot or one-shots lemons. Just sex like a mechanic thing is terrible.

Please, update soon and have big hugs from Brazil!!!

Lere

I love to get hugs - so, of course, you can gimme one! lol. Very nice chapter. Can't wait til you update again.

Well, it's been a while but I have to say I quite appy with it. I think that out of all the ways I've ever seen Naraku portrayed, your's is definately the most fitting. Whenever I think of Naraku in my mind, he comes out like you write him to be and that's awesome characterization. You really tried to get this chapter from all the angles and I'm quite impressed at that, though I wonder why didn't you try from Kagome's angle? I'm a REALLY BAD scrutinist when it comes to detail so I'm soryy about that. You had that many people review you? I'm kinda scared. I would never be able to keep up with that many people reviewing me. I'll have to post a story AFET I'm sure that it's completely finished, so I can release one chapter a week or so to try and keep up the suspense. Anawya enough yammering. I look foward to more of this and I'll look into Benieth the skin tomorrow, as it is really late, or technically early.
Durian

I can't breathe right now. My heart is going a mile a minute and my mouth is still open because the way everything came together. Especially the ending just stunned the hell right out of me. But dare I say I'm afraid of naraku's intentions. I know it will be a happy ending and am happier to read that but you never wrote if it will last. What other torture will inuyasha have to go through because of Kikyou? What about kagome? By the way the writing is great and I know you edited the other chapters but please don't do it to this one,please!! You really have to have more faith in yourself and stop being so FUCKING BLIND TO WHAT EVERYONE ELSE SEES.

I want you to go and take that stupid feeling or voice or what ever that makes you feel your bad and KILL THE SON OF A BUTT FUCKING WHORE ONCE AND FOR ALL. Sorry about the words but this is REALLY PISSING ME OFF. Really just stop doing it or I will do something I know you won't like...
If that happens you will have no one to blame but the son of a butt fucking whore of your whatever..

~You Fan~
But for how long is up to you?!?!

woo! thanks for the update. heh. im happy now.