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Yea baby this is the good stuff, in the words of ronald mcdonald "im lovin it"

hey!! man i love this story!! it's really good please dont stop updateing pleaseeeeee!!!! you cant do that to me !

~rikku

AAHHHHHHH you have no idea how much I needed this new chapter today. *Hands you a marshmallow mocha* You are an amazing word smith your talent in capturing the feelings of the charaters and taking me completely into your vision of Inuyasha is truly amazing. I love the mention of Inuyasha with a TAIL! LOL. I just can't get the vision of how cute he would be with a tail his cute little butt wiggling. I always loved Shippo's and Kouga's tails and have found that a lot of people forget to mention Kouga's tail in lemons. Let's see what words got my hentai blood up oh yes; licking ears, flushed faces and soft silky long hair.....*sighs* I put these words on my fridge with my magnet poetry. Hmmm Mrs. Higurashi 'slipped' something into Kagome's bag huh woundn't be anything of the profalatic nature would it 0_0 Ah and of course Shippo's line 'poor Mirkou I knew thee well' just killed me. As the anime goes on I can see a little of Mirkou rubbing off on Shippo he seems to be getting infatuated with local human girls a lot. LOL. Yes and Inuyasha's sexy voice changing is great that you mentioned it I was able to almost hear his voice saying the lines you write this world so well. Well Well you have put poor Inu in quite a bind though he doesn't want to mate Kagome as a youkai because he's afraid he'll hurt her and he's to jelious to do anything as a human because it wouldn't feel the same. On top of all this gods know what Kikio and Naraku are up to. You write limes so well I'm almost content to never have a lemon....the key word being almost. I reread this story all week when I need a pick me up inbetween classes, you have a great talent with the written word my friend. I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop with poor Inuyasha he keeps putting off telling Kagome and this can only make the final revelation so much worse.*hides under sheet* I have read every story on your favorites list but why dosen't Under the Skin come up? Oh well I just wanted to gush on and on about what an amazing writter you are your every line is thought full and stirs my imagnation. *blows head kisses for the kitty* I love kitty but I'm so freaking alergic ITS NOT FAIR!

Wow... Your "Lime"s are about 10x better than most Lemons I've read, and they top the BEST one's I've read by about 3x!!! PLEASE keep writeing, otherwise I might die of frustration (both mental and... "other")

absolutely awesomeeeeeeeeeeee... i was on vacation.. so i coulln'd read any of your updates.. but oh my god!! ^^ this was a ver good chappie--- i can only imagine what would be of the finally LEMON ^^ keep going please!!!!

Wonderful! Kags and Inu's love is so incredibly detailed here. I do believe I found myself blushing...ever so slightly!
I sure hope Inu begins to understand that Kag's advances are her own...not favored toward one part of him over another!

Another C-note for my review whore...lol. Wowee! Hot and steamy. I really liked how Kagome thought about Inu's pouts and how Shippo could practice in front of a mirror and not look so adorable. I could totally picture his face! Very good job with characterization- the shyness yet longing; very , very well captured and honest. Just as I could imagine them being. Good lime, not crude, and very good imagery! You go, girl!

I wish I had a question for you or even something intersting to say but I don't. All I can say is WOW! I love this story and must thankyou yet again, this time for 2
chaps. I will keep reading and reviewing as long as you write this story.

You're story is absolutely beauitful...i can't think of a way to describe it. It's so sweet yet sexy, so tender yet powerful. You have a way with words that can send shivers through me. That lime from chapter thirteen was absolutely amazing and sexy yet so incredibly sweet and tender. I love the way you do Inuyasha, especially when he's a human.

I'm sorry i've been so bad about reviewing, i'm horrible at it and i think this might actually be my first review for you (i'm so sorry about that, i'm horrible!) but you deserve all the reviews in the world for such a touching and beauitful story. I love it to pieces and i hope that you update soon.

i love it. bit more lemon please and kill kikyo. other than my friends yours is the longest fanfic ive read its awsome