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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person gud
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv this! three words for you: THIS.STORY.ROCKS. it rocks so hard i don't think i can even catch up! plz add more chapters!!!
person Lizashu
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, where do I begin... First of all, I wasn't sure whether to write this in english or spanish (I'm from argentina too)I decided I'd better do it in english (para no quedar muy desubicada jeje). Now to the point, I really love your story!!! For you to have an idea, this is actually the first time I ever leave a review so you can feel flattered ;) I can't wait to read more!! (no te sientas presionada, no es una indirecta *pone cara angelical*). The only thing that seemed OC for me was the way Kikyou acted, which was kinda odd. But again, maybe it's just me. The rest is perfect, loved the way you put Inuyasha's feelings regarding her and Kagome. FYI, I'm a huge Inu/Kag fan myself. Also, the scene where Sango discovers Kagome's bruise in her neck and her excuses... and the way Miroku reacted... can't keep going, just...laughing too hard. I'm ramblig now, better stop here. My intention was only to say I.LOVE.IT. but it turned out longer that I expected. And look, I can't stop typing!! Esta bien, mejor me callo de una buena vez. Mencione que me encanta tu historia? =)
person TricksterGoddess
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fine I'll review^^ I'm really enjoying this story, its sooo incredibly sweet and I'm glad that you're not rushing the lemon and allowing their love to grow. So there, I spent a minute reviewing, happy now? I'm am of course anticipating the next wonderful chapter and hope to read it soon, Keep up the good work^__^!!!
person BrethlessM
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story tonight and I'm anxious for the next chapter! I wanted to review and tell you how much I'm enjoying your story because I just started posting my first fanfic here (shamless self promotion) and I know how addictive reviews are! Woo-hoo for lime's and waiting patiently for lemons!
person gud
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! i love your story/fanfiction!!!! it's GREAT! PLZ REVEIW!
person lady_green_bat
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So does this mean that we will next see Kagome in the arms of the youkai?!? Ahhh, it's delicious! And yes, I much prefer the fact that you have long edited chapters to short, useless ones with tons of mistakes. Long chapters are the way to go! This is a great chapter, giving us a better perception of why Inuyasha hates/is disgusted by his human side. If you are planning the third pairing (which I hope you are) please keep the intelligence of your story. Don't have a rape scene of sorts, or, on the other extreme, don't turn the youkai into a Beauty and the Beast type character. He is a demon aftervall and where would be the fun if there wasn't an element of danger. Keep up the good work!
person Dark Rain
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I'm totally hooked and curious as to how Naraku is going to screw up everyone's lives again. Should be interesting!

Keep updating!! I'm still reading!!

person Echo
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammit all!!! I'm dying here.... more... more... more. *sob... sniffle* It's a big tease to have to wait for the next chapter.... but I suppose I will go find what's left of my patience. ;)
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, i love you story!! plz update soon!!!! i hope inuyasha gets the courage to tell kagome before kikiyou or naraku tell him. pppllzzzzz hurry!! and if u would like could u check out my story? ja ne!!
person DRAKE220
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. my mind is blown. you guys have fabulously dirty minds!! whoo-wheee! and i like the fact that inu is truly conflicted. this is very well done.