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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person GAH!
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK! TOO ... *choke* ... MUCH ... *gag* LIME! GACK! *falls to the floor, choking*
Seriously, I think I can make my dentist a rich, er, person, with this chapter.
person Yathtallar Z
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm a girl from Hungary, and I read your ff. I LOVE it and just want to ask you something. PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! or I'll go insane the very soon......
person kagomegirl
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and i cant wait to find out what happens next.I hope u can countinue writing.I though that was a great lime. So when is the lemon comin
person baku
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* GOMEN!!!!! i dont think ive reviewed latley, sorry!!! i've recently had a couple of deaths in and around the family (sorta freaky, ne?) and i havent really been reading. whew *fans herself* that was STEAMY!!! i really loved that chappy. i found the hut building thing funny too. oh, and i liked the way inu said "kagomes mouth was my universe"lol, i loved that part.yeah, keep those lifesized plushies for ever and ever and ever!!!!=]*hunts kikyo down with a butcher knife* that bitch will PAY for making inuyasha feel guilty!!!!! MUHAHAHAHAHA *ahem* yeah..*tries to act all cool*...nice chappy
person Aislin
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read all the current chapters in the span of 2 days, and DAMN! You sure blew me away! I feel pity for Kikyo, and great love for the way you've portrayed my favorite couple.

You rock my socks.

During the last chapter, I had to constantly remind myself that you had promised not to fudge it over with any horrid, uncomfortable Kikyo seduction-success... but I was still paranoid, and just waiting for something other than Inu's density to ruin the moment.

The fact that you set it up so that we never quite found out how Kikyo's "new" body turned out, and from Inuyasha's weakened perspective instead of actually Kagome's when she returned, I thought that just maybe, you might be pulling the wool over our heads.

But no such debauchery... phew.

You don't fail to deliver. I cannot, as most likely all the readers feel, wait for the time when Inuyasha will have to stop procrastinating and fess up. The longer he hides it the more guilty he looks, and even incredible Kagome may have a dooly of a pickle overlooking such an omission.

I love it, give us more! I vow to be a loyal reviewer, so update soon please!
person Alvida
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost didn't continue this fic after chapter 2, it was so painful, but I did and I really like it. In this latest chapter, I kept waiting for Inuyasha to call out "Kikyo", for no good reason, and muff it up but, thankfully, that didn't happen. I keep waiting, in fear, for the shoe to drop when Kagome finds out about Chapter 2.
person Psycho Koneko
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on girly!!! You need to update.....I am sitting on the edge of my seat here! I just CAN'T wait until the next chappy!! Totally ready for it, so please don't keep us waiting much longer!!! Update, update update update *starts chanting mystically as a thin mist forms around her*............still haven't updated yet?? *mumbles something*......damnit, it didn't work! I know you won't dissapoint, love you bunches girly, hope you get it goin soon.....always such a great read, and I feel deprived from my used to be daily great read.......now I have to wait for it.....it is torture, but absence makes the heart grow fonder, and I just can't wait to see what Inu and Kags get into next!!

Always much love, ramen, and pocky!
Psycho Koneko ~_-
person Don\'t Ask
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really need to make the next chapter, AND QUICK... I really loved this chapter though... Also I want to find out what Kikyo is up to, and what other games Naraku has in store for Inuyasha and Kagome, just a request, you should make something happen between Sango and Miroku.... hint hint


Ok, that is all I have to say, Goodbye

From: Don't Ask
person Bianca
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is great. I ove it. I'm hoping that Inuyasha soon understand what Kagome is trying to tell him. I can't wait for the next chapter. So far the story is great and I can't wait to here more. Love ya bunches!^_^
person Laura
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter