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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful!!! Our first glimpse of Kagome dealing with youkai Inu and you mastered it perfectly! Always a treat to read ^_^
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe, this was such a good chapter.. took you long enough^^ I like the story line and how it doesn't seem like its going to get boring anytime soon, and it doesn't drag on. Detail is a very good thing, it helps for me to be able to picture what is going on in my head, like a movie, instead of getting confused, so that's always a plus. I can't wait for the next chapter, and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...what can I say? Your writing totally rocks!! You must put alot of thought and effort into it, there's a LOT of thought and detail which is REALLY good. When you read it the words go really good together, has a nice flow to it. I definitly look forward to reading more of your story.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....it took a while to get out but it was soooo worth the wait. As for the hentai's (myself included) who've been asking for the lemon...we all know that there is a time and place and for a real story, not PWP, you have to get there...but you've definitely made the wait worthwhile with the great lime that you've worked in to tide us over. Tender moments, aggressive demon side, and baka Inu. I loved how you worked in the human side and the demon side into this chapter, and still managed to include some dialogue with the other characters, as well. And I'm positive Scherezade liked the demon bit...I know I did! Great stuff! Oh, can I ask a favor? More...please? :)
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! You are such a great writer!! I just can't wait to see what happens next!! You could never disappoint me you're so good!!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
......... Can't think of anything, i've officially run out of words to use, i can't think of anything more to say about how GREAT and EXCELLENT this fic is... i've used all words i know so instead i'll go with this:
Can i please borrow your brains and skills? I mean, if i could add your skills and brains to my own, i can't even imagine how PERFECT and DIVINE the fics would be from there on out... but then again, i'm only human, your a goddess of writing so it is not my place to ask for something like that.
Over the top wasn't it? Oh well.... keep writing, i will without the smallest doubt keep reading and reviewing no matter what.
Anyway, if you're interested, i've updated a new chapter to "Crimson Eyes of Inuyasha".
See ya again!
Can i please borrow your brains and skills? I mean, if i could add your skills and brains to my own, i can't even imagine how PERFECT and DIVINE the fics would be from there on out... but then again, i'm only human, your a goddess of writing so it is not my place to ask for something like that.
Over the top wasn't it? Oh well.... keep writing, i will without the smallest doubt keep reading and reviewing no matter what.
Anyway, if you're interested, i've updated a new chapter to "Crimson Eyes of Inuyasha".
See ya again!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chappy!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I'm so glad you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been waiting (seems like FOREVER), constantly checking back for updates, and now ... it was TERRIFIC! I went back and read through the whole story again, and I'm wondering what Naraku is going to do to "destroy" InuYasha and Kagome once he marks her - I mean, I know he thinks he can get away with kidnapping Kagome and that will 'destroy' InuYasha, but we've already seen that even when his Youkai is involved, he *can* remember what's going on. So I guess I'm confused as to why Naraku thinks he'll become totally mindless when he *should* know that Naraku has Kagome. Oh well, I guess I'll have to resort to checking back for updates again to find out, won't I? Thanks for making this dreary mid-winter day so much more interesting!!!
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. do you plan to keep working on it?
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i reaaly like ur story, u r such a good write and i hope u update soon.please dont give up on this story.plz