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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person howlingblue
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a wonderful story!
I love how descriptive you are with each characters thoughts and feelings at every point.
Just bring out some more chapters, I can't wait for the next ones!
person BrethlessM
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, happy day! Thanks for the update... I was getting restless! I send you oodles of de-writer's block goodness and wish you well. I really enjoyed the beginning of BtS and I'm eagerly awaiting more! I wish you well, my fellow author!

person Lady_Sttar
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Please update soon! I want more InuYasha and Kagome goodness! That whole thing with kogura and fluffy was really sweet BTW!
person HAP
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, i guess that's true. All people on this site could be HAP XD

Anyways, awesome chapter. I love Kagura. Keep up the good work.
person makulu
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! Updated! ... It may be a filler, but it is a good one and I´m not a bit dissapointed. I think Kagura and Fluffy are the perfekt match and I hope you make their currently non-existent relationship as physical and steamy as Inu/Kag in the future. Sesshy may be ice in behaviour but I´m sure he is fire in bed ... and dominating of course. Will Kagura submit? I don´t think so. This is going to be interresting. As for ch 14, did no one hear the two making out in the hut?? I belive they were pretty loud. I would be...
person AxLoverCassie
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya, you updated!!! I've been waiting and you definatly do not disapoint!!! I can't wait to see what happens!!
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank god you updated! and i thought that this chap rocked. so what does sess really think of kagura? is he slightly surprised by her daring, or confused as to why she would seek him out?

and you know what? i've always been a kikyou basher, and this just reinforced it big time. i might understand her reasons, but i can't forgive her for them. (sigh)

i can't wait to see what you have in store next!
person lere
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank God you are back! And this chapater is what I like about your fic (beside the lemons, of course): THE PLOT! You make a fantastic chapter like this one, telling us what the characters are thinking, feeling and planing. It is like glue! I'm glued! Addicted!

I can't wait for the next update, girl! Please, don't make me wait until the next soccer game between Brasil and Argentina (it will be in June, I guess), because maybe, I can send you a funny review. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Big hugs hermana!!! Love you!!!

Lere
person Zelix
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could i hate you? I can't hate someone whose fic i happen to love! I perfectly understand what it's like to have a writer's block and not being able to update for ages, i really do, so don't worry... as long as you finish this awesome fic someday and not quit in midway, i will always and forver be a fan of it, i promise you that. So keep writing and keep this fic up, you are just too talented to give up and quit, believe me, you are so good!
person JuniperJazz
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going through YoukaiMusashi withdraw... ;-)

You know the feeling you get when you can't live without your caffiene kick
(or drug habit, or Inuyasha episode for the week... whatever it is that floats
your boat) and then *suddenly* it gets yanked from you??? Like I said,
YoukaiMusashi withdraw - it's a new disease my dog made up when
we were contemplating (together) what you might have planned for our dear
Inu?

He said it was an entire 5 week record (or something). Anyway, whenever
I pull this fic up to read, he tries to crawl in my lap and stares at the screen
while I scroll through your work. I'm thinking he's addicted too.........

Plus, I know it's silly to theorize in such a manner, but since he's not got the
skill to type a review him self, I figure that you might appreciate knowing that
this JJ isn't the *only* one in this house-hold who adores your work!!!!!!