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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person nutterbutter
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's ok, shit happens :) I'm just glad the story is going to continue. Yay for Love Poison!
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry to hear about ouchies requiring stitches - that sucks. Take good care of yourself and don't worry because when you get the chance to update it will be great.
person Aislynn PK
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I don't know whether I ever wrote you another review like I promised! I'm SOOO sorry! I really hope you can update soon, I miss reading your story, although I could go back and read it all again! Good news! I finally posted a few little drabbles on MM.org, I'm so proud of myself! ::does happy dance:: Whenever you get the time, you should check out "Tipsy" and "Random Short Stories" on MM. I love THotW, great chapter. Kagura's ability to become the wind isn't really something I've seen before. I like her new power, very original from what I can tell! KUDOS!!

I really can say that I "TOTALLY RELATE" on the whole writer's block thing. I have been trying to get the new chapter of Tipsy up, but I can't seem to get it how I play it out in my mind...not to mention the fact that I don't have a beta.... :( I'm so excited about your story...the wait only makes the chapters you update that much better. (and your story is SO worth the wait) I am UBER excited about a new chapter of LP and I hope you can get the inspiration you need. You are wonderful, and I luvs you girly...you have been so kind and patient with me, even putting up w/ me! I know you have it in you, because you have an amazing talent for writing. I envy you!

I know you won't disappoint us in the next chapter. You never do! Keep up the good work, and please try not to keep us loyal fans waiting much longer...its such sweet torture. I'll be back here rooting you on ::rootrootroot:: WE LUBB TEH Y.M.!!!! WE BOW DOWN TO TEH WICKED SKEELS OF TEH Y.M.!!!

Lots of love, ramen, and extra extra extra pocky!
PK
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! When I read the first chapter it got me heated up from the descriptive writing. I just have to say that you need to update because the suspense is KILLING ME!
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So I just watched Inuyasha up to Episode 27 and I'm totally hooked. Naturally, my pervy mind requires heading to AFFN to see what is out there.....and I found your fic! So cute and fun with a lot of thought put into it. I'm loving it! It is very cool to see someone really embracing the idea of Inuyasha as a half demon and that it makes him unique - clearly we don't have to worry about a human Inuyasha by the time you are done....Obviously I can hardly wait for the lemony goodness, but you know what you are doing so I'll try to be patient. Keep on rocking and updating and I'll definitely keep reading!
person Kari
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh mY gosh i was so happy very happy to see that u updated, i read it a couple of days ago, but didn't have enough time to review. but i wanted to say that i reread the all 15 chapters all over again, that's how much i love the story. wonderful chapter keep up the awesome job and i can't wait till u update again and hopefully soon. pretty please w/ wipcream on top ^_^
person Rei_spirit
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very well written and I like it so far I am currently on chapter 11 but i have a few concerns one namely being that Kikyo will actually seduce Inuyasha and he will make a fatal mistake see that reaaly ruins a fic for me and i'd rather no go further until I know. So if you could pleae email me back about the later contents in your fic that'd be nice
Rei_spirit
person Lizashu
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I LOVE this ch...but you already know that :) This ch reminds me of Dokumizuchi or Meioujuu, those manga chapters everyone thought were mere fillers but end up leading to important events. And even if it were just a filler I'd still like it because it's Kagura!! I LUV HER!!! ::waves Kagura flag:: Kagura and Sesshoumaru are perfect for each other...
Again, great ch :)
L.

person tsuzuri
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!! Its rare to find a story that allows you to identify with the bad guys but you are a great writter and did it superb! Keep it up ^_^
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Filler Smiller there is no such thing its all good. *blushs* you're just so sweet to mention my humble review but yes you did make the whole thing clear about how full demon Inuyasha talks, in the anime he's kinda coldly cruel, but I find your interpretation of it with the whole 'Tarzan' type approach it be very amusing and kinda sexy. But GASP WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING WITH MY KAGURA!! I love her so much she's such a great character I but I'm fearing for my fav incarnation's life are you planning on making her fodder for Kikyou's new body?!?!?! I really enjoy how you write Kagura even though she's a 'bad guy' you make her such a sympathic character I feel more for her sad plight than for Kikyou's. So much has happened in this story but really its just what a couple of days? You're making me fairly dance with antisipation^_^