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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person szmadad
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Knock, knock...it's me...umm..remember me? ::Scherezade ducks as Argentinian tomatoes come flying at her from every direction::

:D

I have soooo much to catch up on and I've been a naughty, naughty girl. But I just read "Here Comes The Sun," so I'm making some progress. I loved full demon yasha...and your dialogue between him and Kagome! You already know that pairing just brings out something delicious for me! This was yet another chapter where everyone is wonderfully in character and that the ideas and writing flow so well. I really loved how you cleverly used youkai Yasha's statement of "only one" as a way for Kagome to express her frustration over the fact that Inuyasha can't seem to forget Kikyou... But hooray! Inuyasha *finally* admits that Kikyou is at fault for something...that she has hurt him...done something to him...that he is not the one to blame entirely for the messy state he's in.

I need to keep reading to find out what happens next...Inu's taken a huge step in admitting that his human blood has been weakened and that Kikyou is somehow involved. But...Kag's has no clue as to what exactly has gone on. What will she think about it and more importantly, what will she do??

Though I know we've talked about this via email, it's still so exciting to read it all. Ok, I'm off to study for now, but will check back in later to do the rest of my catch up reading!

:)
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. You're doing great. I have to agree that writer's block is a bitch and sometimes it's hard to find inspiration. Keep up the great work and try to get better. Kagome's thoughts and actions would have been so much like mine that I kind of connected with her. You have detailed every character wonderfully. Lots of love
person Alice M.
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have this way of writing, that sounds so much like the show. I love that.
Up-date soon.
person chanda
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the artwork.. This is a very well done story. Please update soon.

p.s. Good luck with the writers block.

Chanda
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you capture the thoughts of Inuyasha and Kagome so beautifully in this chapter. Kagome's own insecurities and Inuyasha's guilt over Kikyou and what happened really play out well in this chapter. Please update soon, this has definitely become on of my favorite fanfics.
person Aislynn PK
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You had an accident...? That sux, I haven't been home for a week, so I haven't been able to check up on LP's progress or anything. I really hope you get to update soon, but I won't fuss at you for not updating sooner... I will be supportive. O.K. so, I'm BEGGING: *kneels at YM's feet* pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update soon!!! AAARRRGGG. *falls over anime style*

Ok, I'm better now. Stitches have to majorly suck ass... so sorry to hear about that. Take your time and don't strain yourself on updating, we all know how hectic life can be, don't we everyone? Yes, thats right. Even though we all tend to get impatient, we still love you and are still waiting patiently for you to continue your story. I was starting to wonder if you were still alive though, YM, I was getting worried.

Glad to hear from you though and to know that you are still working on LP. Please get well soon, and good luck on your overtime! That has to suck too! I feel for you girly.

Lots of love, ramen, and extra chocolate filled pocky made with love for your boo-boo's,
Aislynn
person fumetsu~hinami
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me love this fanfic! its the best 1 ive ever read! no joke! >_< MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! please put up next chap soon! i shall always be here...lol dewa matta! ^.^
person makulu
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If the rest of your story is as good as the beginning and you promise that you will finish it or at lest write a lot more, than I will patiently wait and check every day for your update (hopefully not an a/n).
Your big fan makulu
person Lori
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm glad to hear your accident wasnt too serious. Safety is a good thing. I think that well excuses the fact that an update hasnt been made. Take care of yourself and get well soon. Oh, and because laughter is the best medicine, go ebay and search for Liberty Mutual paperweight. Read the Q&A portion. It's quite humorous. Ciao~
person Amber
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This the the best written fan fic I have ever had the pleasure to lay eyes on. I lvoe how you captured the characters, yet gave them a realistic sexual side. I also love how you put actioal thi ngs that happen in the anime into play. I simply love it, your works are so on my favorites list. Wonderfull, Simply wonderfull! Ive only read the frist part so far, I had to stop and commend you!!!