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Once again, a mind blowing chapter filled with VERY well made character depth. Sesshoumaru's way of thinking is so... fitting for him, you've portrayed him and Inuyasha so damn well in this fic, i love this fic and i just love the way you write it, always leaving us wanting for more like drug addicts, evil and effective, nice combination. Anyway, i can't wait for the next chapter and it's a shame to hear that people aren't reviewing like they used to... but oh well, i know what that is like, since my own fic "Time Soul Exodus" has a very slow update rate as well, which means that when people have to wait too long for the next update, they tend to lose interest until more than one new chapter is out, you know, to have more to read instead of a single chapter once a few weeks or so... it's a shame to admit but i too tend to be like that at times, wait until more chapters are out before i review, i think everyone tends to be like that once in a while.

So you could say that it's down season for reviews for now, but keep updating and it is bound to get up again, that's what i think anyway.

Oh yes, thank you for agreeing to second my fic Time Soul Exodus in the upcoming seconding season at the IY fan guild, this is the first time i've been nominated there and to be nominated into two categories to boot... wow, i never thought it would happen, i really didn't. But... you said that your fic is also nominated into the best serial fic category? Mine was too... which means that when the voting period begins... we'll be rivals on that department! Oh boy, i really need to shape up my writing pace if i want to keep people interested about the nomination, this should be interesting don't you think? Though i'm pretty sure you'll win in that category, seeing that you've been nominated a few times already which means you have the advantage of being more known than i am... even though i'll most likely lose to you, it will still be a VERY interesting experience to me, i hope you agree on that.

Well, this has been long enough of a review don't you think? If you want to talk more, Email me like as always and we will talk, good luck in the future with this fic and hope you'll update soon!

- Zelix, the king of plots and your number 1, most loyal fan who will be there for each and every update.

Hey there... I sure hope you get your new chapter posted soon!! I miss your wonderful, creative, and always entertaining ideas! I want to flatter you tonight and tell you that I've been craving your writing so I just went back and re-read your WHOLE story, AGAIN!!! It, as it always has been, is absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I love this story, and if I could, I WOULD marry it. I want you to know you are my absolute FAVORITE author, and tonight just proved it even more. LP is a top of the line story that is just breathtaking. You can tell that hard work and absolute love has been put into this story. I can't wait until the new chapter, and I can't wait to hear from you again!

I do hope to have the picture I've drawn for your fic posted soon, I just can't seem to get this thingie down. (plus, this PK is to lazy to hook up her scanner!) ::sigh:: Well, anyways, back to flattering you! I was absolutely blown away all over again at how well you have captured the characters and made the transition from where they were to where they are in your story seem so natural. I'm SO proud of you YM! Look at how far you've gotten with LP! I sure hope you don't drop out on us now!! (I know you won't, you love LP too much!)

Please give us waiting fans what we crave, and update, SOON ::glare:: I can't wait until the next chapter! As always, you're a doll and you know I totally envy your writing "skeelz". Maybe you'll rub off on me! Please try to e-mail me soon, I would love to hear from you again. I've posted some new stories on MM.org, so if you want to look into them, let me know and I'll give you a link. (not really "stories" just one-shot small type fics...) You have a wonderful story going here, and you will always be my fave author and I love you girl! Keep up the great work!

Lots of love, ramen, and pocky,
Aislynn PK

I LUV IT!!!!!! PLS UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hello! finally you have updated!!!! I'm soo happy ^^
well, you really didn't answear much... Did you even like those pics?
oh, kami, when will the time arrive when we can read the reaaly started story? I'm going insane waiting for the sequel...

Awww, what would we do without their miscommunications? I love their stubborness and how do you use it against them. And poor Inu-puppy, so self-conscious, no wonder Kago loves him ... who doesn't. But I think with all this I-doesn't-desrve-this-woman-crap he will do something stupid, even more stupid than the whole Kikyou-thing. But that's only more good stuff to write about, right? I'm really happy that you are just geting started because I looove this fic. And Bokuseno??? Let me guess... Inus demon blood can be tamed with... ok, no idea. You're the author, you tell me. Soon, please n__n ?!
Waiting for the next update, Ja Ne.

Hey there YM!! Great chappie, so sorry it took me so long to review... I've been rushing around here like a chicken with...well, you all know the rest! GUESS WHAT!! I've done a fanart for one of your chapters...(ch 15) As soon as my scanner starts working again, I'll post it on Deviantart. I hope you like it, although I'm going to admit that it is sorely lacking in "teh skeelz" that most artists out there seem to posess.

Anyway, I shall be back soon I hope. When I return, I should have a link to the fanart, and I really want to have time to brag on this chapter (because it was VERY good, like all your others) but I'm in a rush!

Lots of love as always, and extra ramen and pocky for your head wound to heal fast,
Aislynn, Psycho Koneko

0_0 ...i love the new chap...omg im gonna cry...;_; *runs away before she starts crying uncontrolibly* >_<

It's so nice to finally have an update! I hope you're feeling better and that your muses sing to you again soon! Wonderful chapter from a wonderful writer. Will you update your other story soon too? Looking forward to next time!

This is a cool story. Quite nice to see a strong Kagome in this. Too many IY stories have her as being too weak willed to be IC (In char). Kagome being weak willed happens more in the alternate Sess/Kag stories though. I know in the manga that Kagome is the weakest character in terms of 'powers', but there's more inner strength than many of the others that are more 'powerful'. Keep up the good work, and keep the more in-depth characterizations coming. :)

I think your writing is fantastic! . . . so detailed and well thought out. I really am enjoying this story and also your reassurances that you will finish it. Currently, I keep a list of about 80 fics that I check on for updates; only 11 have been finished. It is very sad, for many of them show great talent in their authors. I would not check on a story that was not entertaining, interesting, and well written. You are definitely on my list. Thank you for posting and sharing. Cynbad146