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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person Lori
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great as ever! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope you're having a good week =)
person Yathtallar_Z
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELLOOOOO!!! love to see you again!!
No! I didn't forget you! I stil love you! see? I wrote you a big review!
umm... gomen, I didn't get said e-mail! :((((((( if I had got that mail, surely I wouldn't have ask about the pics! it's not your fault, but idiot hotmail's! jerk mail system...
eh... your last few lines knocked me out...!!! please, I beg you! UPDATE as soon as possible!!!!!
well, this time I would have a remark. Sango and Kaede (and later others too) said that "inu-youkai mate for a life", and I think mark a mate means the sexual act. then how could it be possible to Sess had a lot of women for rutting? these two are the same, aren't they?
and an other question, just for teasing :) how can Bokuseno know everything, things like what's in someone's mind? the birds chirped?
person Kirah
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't remember if I reviewed last night... well technically 4 this morning (I had just discovered that you had posted three new chappies and had to read them all) but anyways... I LOVE THIS STORY! I'm so glad that you've updated this story... :D It's romantic, not very OOC, and also makes me want to tell Inuyasha to get a grip. Sooo... PLEASE UPDATE!!!! I'll make you a cake! Or at least send you a picture of one!
person Jessica
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've totally got into this story. I hope you update soon-I really like how it has been written, and in my opinion, very good character portrayal.
person Lizashu
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm here, see? Happy? lol... Well, you already know what I think of this ch, it's one of my favourites so far. Sorry I didn't read and review it earlier. You know, I'm tempted to draw a fanart of this ch...I've alreasy have two ideas, but I've never done it before so I doubt I'll do it. Maybe one day, when my inspiration comes again (I don't know where the hell it went...)
Anyway, I loved this ch and can't wait to read what happens next!!
L.
person howlingblue
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! you're back! ^_^

Loved new chapter, it's great to see an outside perspective on everything!

Keep this one going, I can't wait to see how it turns out!
person Kid ^_^
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait....OMG! Don't tell me I've never reviewed this fic before!!!! I haven't!!!!! AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! JESUS CHRIST, WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH ME?!?!?!?!?!?! ARGH! Damn you days when I just read stories and didn't wait for the authors to post new chaps and didn't review the fics!! >_< ACK! Shit! Let's see if I wrote a review but never posted it........let's see.....nope...-_-;; Damn...I was hoping there was...Well, anyway, I have been reading this story for a while...so...just letting you know that. Oh, and, I lost this fic.....or in other words...after reading all the chaps I just left -_-;; (I never checked when people updated and I never reviewed back then) , so when I found it I realized, 'This is the fic where it had such a good portrayel of Inu's thoughts in the first chap!' and 'The fic with the warning of spoilers for the first chap.' Whichever, I found it again, and that's all that matters ^_^. I am happy to say that I have authors now ^_^, ones that I always check when they update (you're one, by the way ~_^) Good luck with your fic! And hey, try working some more on Underneath The Skin with Scherzade ~_^...errr....Schzerade...? Argh....I'm not sure @_@. Anyway, happy writing!

~*~
you are here alone again
in your sweet insanity
all too calm, you hide yourself from reality
do you call it solitude? do you call it liberty?
when all the world turns away to leave you lonely

the fields are filled with desires
all voices crying from freedom
but all in vain they will fade away
there's only you to answer you, forever

in blinded mind you are singing
a glorious hallelujah
the distant flutter of angels
they're all too far, too far to reach for you

I am here alone again
in my sweet serenity
hoping you will ever find me in my place
I will call it solitude when all my songs fade in vain
fly my voice, far away to eternity


~ The World, Yuki Kajiura, .hack//SIGN
~*~

(Felt like adding that, considering I'm listening to it. Kind of like on deviantart, eh? It was just the first verse, at first, but then I added the whole thing, just for kicks. ~_^)
person Kari
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, i have come back to reading fanfiction cause i've been really busy w/ work and really haven't had time, but i come back and see that u have updated twice since my departure. i was so happy to see that u have updated this work of art ^_^ i loved both new chapters and i'm so excited to see what's comming up next for our most wonderful soulmates. can't wait till u update again and hopefully its soon!

i'm so excited i can't wait!
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter too as well as all the other ones. I can't wait until Inuyasha disappoints Naraku. He's stronger than that and Naraku underestimates him. Maybe Inuyasha will realize that he is all the same. That he is both human AND youkai. He is the best of both worlds, like I always say. He has emtional strength and he has power all rolled into one. I think that's awesome, but he is so thickheaded that he doesn't understand that. Inuyasha baka. I enjoyed the ramen and I beg of you to update again soon. I'm biting my nails with the suspense. It's killing me. And I throw out a cookie for you because you ROCK as an author.
person skywolf (can\'t be bothered to sign it)
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the last chapter :) Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon!