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Hope all is well with you! I finally got caught up on the story, and I am feverishly awaiting the day that these two finally join. Your writing style keeps me sucked in through every chapter!

You did a great job of examining Inuyasha's feelings of conflict and self-denigration in the first chapter. That was awesome, and the thought of Inu jerking off for the first time was hot. Nice job with the dream sequence too! I enjoyed it. :)

I just wanted to let you know I finished reading this over the course of a weekend and I absolutely love it. I can't wait to see Kagome's reaction when she finds out Inuyasha's "dirty little secret" and Kikyo...I hope she gets what is coming to her. Great story all around and I definitely can't wait to read more. Thanks!

its been months an montht since you updated *crys* =(

Almost 38,000 views and 500+ reviews, what else could I possibly say that hasnt already stoked your ego? ^_~ Amazing work, but... this 3 month hiatus you have going on here is killing me... I need to know whats gonna happen next, I cant pick up a really good book and drop it halfway through or else Ill go crazy.

Updatey soon, yes? ^_^

I stumbled across this story, looking for ideas for one of my own. And I'm completely blown away. This is one of the best Inuyasha stories I've ever read; the fact that it is a lemon takes nothing away from the story itself. Your characterization is right on: I can hear the seiyuu voices saying the lines, which is a mark of a great story. (Well, maybe not in the sex scenes. That would be kinda strange.) You really should think about writing professionally.

Too often, a lemony story will end up being too much sex and not enough plot. (I'm ashamed to admit that I know that...) You don't have that problem. The love scenes fit into the plot seamlessly and are cute...yes, cute! Love isn't clean and surgical, nor is it dirty and gross. It's clumsy and it's funny and it's strange and it's true. You've captured all of that, and you're not even done yet!

I am definitely bookmarking this story, and I'm quite happy to find you haven't (hopefully) finished it yet. Thank you for a wonderful story, even if it did make me stay up far too late reading it...which is *another* mark of a good story.

Sentinel28A

Great!

Sweet Jesus. Twenty-five chapters of rated R material, then BAM! NC-17 straight through the fucking roof! I could write some kind of in-depth review here, but at 35000+ hits and 500+ reviews under this magnificent story's belt, I feel that there is nothing I can say here that hasn't been said already.

But, you know what? I'm going to do it anyway.

You are an excellent writer, one of the very best on this site. Your continued patronage to us here is a heartening reminder that AFF isn't quite as screwed up as some would suggest, and even though the InuYasha anime is no more and the manga is of limited availability here in the United States, fans new and old alike will still be able to enjoy it through the stunning work of you and your peers.

YM!!!!!! Where have you been! Strike that! You just told us. So glad to read you! I was worried when you did not update in your usual timely way. Big Congrats on the 1st place for the lemonade/limon/limonade! It is well deserved (and a little congrats to Trusuprise also). This chapter was so touching and well versed. The limon was so well written. It NEVER sounded like just a bunch of quick groping and panting, which many limes/lemons turn into, unfortuanately. The sensitivity in the scene made it so much more. The part that was especially touching to me was afterward when Kagome asked InuYasha, "Are you happy?" Other mentionable parts were: '. . . love has a new meaning;' " . . . stupid human side gets to have all the fun . . .," really humorous. I am not going to list more because basically I liked ALL of it. I am sorry to hear about the personal problems and I hope the July finals do not exhaust you. Update in August . . . got it; I will be here! It is nice to know that you will be around. Thank you for all of your considerations. You are one of the most humblest authors that I have ever read and believe it or not, it adds to your work. (". . . tentacles . . . bad career move . . .," still hilarious, HAAHAAHAAAAA!) Catch you later, Cynbad146 Final thought . . .'Pocky, all mine, muhahahaaaaaaaa!'

I just love this fic! It`s truly one of the most wondeful things to read on this site!
Thank you for the update and please- soon, more?