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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person sendosha
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No wonder you have won the award, your fic is great! Congratulations! Inuyasha was always a baka, a bastard or a completly asshole in other fics but in your story he is so much more and I really like it. And thank you for not attempting to make Sesshoumaru a couple with Rin, I´ve always dreaded that idea *shudder*. I´m looking forward for the next chapter, if your limes left me breathless now I can´t imagine what your lemons will do to me. You write with a passion that I admire, *hands in the air* gambare!!!
person Kid ^_^
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! New chapter up!!!! Out of curiousity, when did you post Chapter 18 (As in time, not date. It's alright if I do not get a response.)? Okay, it's 12:44 AM, so that kind of almost counts for Sept. 1, right? ^_^; I've been waiting soooooo long for one of my authors to post something (Wheezambu posted Lights, Camera, ACTION!, so that had me satisfied) and now you've posted! Yay!! Can't wait to read it.....heh heh...Yeah, I haven't yet. ^_^; But I shall! Right now! Ready time!!!!!

p.s. Thanks for posting! (Once again ~_^) :) ^_^ :) ^_^ :) ^_^ :)
person Michael18
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is well written and has a good plot. It has been developing really well and I can't wait to read what happens next. So update soon please.
person The Rose Society
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is incredible. I especially love your characterization of Sesshoumaru (I love that cold youkai too much for my own good). I love being surprised with high quality fics after a long day of sifting through them all. You've gotten the heart of the characters so well and the plot could totally be a part of a much sexier anime IY. heehee! Please keep feeding our love of IY!
person Cynbad146
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are on it, Youkai Musashi! You say, "the story writes itself," does that mean you do not plan an idea of the story, or have some kind of outline, when you write? How long does a chapter usually take to write? If you are shooting straight from the hip, then I am very impressed. I am enjoying the story very much. Your writing style is well detailed and highly entertaining. Your humor is good too. Thank you, Cynbad146
person Kid ^_^
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee!!! Worth the wait indeed! ^_^ Ha ha, two people have reviewed since my last review. So, two people between 12:44 AM to 2:10 AM. Ha ha. Anyway. Wow, this chapter! I read the chapter's name and just burst into happy, squeling giggles! I wish I could draw too, drake220, oh how much I do wish that. -_- I hope someone DOES draw that scene though. It would be so lovely! ^_^ Aaaaa, Miroku and Sango pairing....maybe..? ~_^ Ha ha, good ol'Mir/San. Oooooo, big cliffie (As I have said to myself before, "Naraku, you bastard!")!!!! Let's see how it all turns out, hm? ~_^ Will Inu come and save her or perhaps some other twist of fate? Only time and your magnificent writing will tell.... ^_^

Congrats on the awards, by the way! You COMPLETLY deserved the 1st place for Best Characterization. Oooo, that's right. I have to read Trusurprise's "Corporate" story. ^_^ Hee hee. And I SO agree with the whole mating thing in your AN. I like it when people think like that toward the whole mating...uh, thing. Well, I better be off to bed. Damn, I can't read my book now. @_@ Curse you beautiful, wonderful and multiple stories, curse you! ^_^

Ha ha, if I'm not too late maybe I'll be the 350th reviwer! ~_^ Lol. Go go go!!!!
person inufan625
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so it just so happens that earlier today I reread this fic and was hoping fervently for an update and when I checked back just now and found one I was so excited. I really am enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what's going to happen. I hope all goes well and that you area able to update in a week as you are planning to do.

I wasn't expecting that at the end *hands Kagome a bottle of Listerine* Poor Kagome... It should be interesting to see how this will play out. Anyway great work and I can't wait for more. Congrats on the IYFG awards...
person AxLoverCassie
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya you updated!! As always amazing. You're such a good writer that I hope you write more after this!
person drake220
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ramen and pocky to us?!!??!! ramn and pocky to YOU for being a genious!! That scene when Kag was sitting with inu and his haori was enveloping them? So well written, I could see inu's slightly paniced expression, kagome's happy expression- everything. It made me wish I could draw so that I could physically render this amazing scene for the eyes. Are you going to be throwing in miroku/sango get togather parts or just sticking with the main story line? Absolutely worth the wait, as always. Please update soon!
person mel
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What is going on!? why havent you updateded?????
This is one of the best storys out there and i am dieing to see it finish so please dont give up on it. if it's encouragement you need i am more then willing to give you all you need. so please post another chapter soon or an a/n to let us loyal fans know what is going on.