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(WHISTLES AND CLAPS) Great tale as usual, YM! This penpaninu is very pleased and happy! Your writing style is second to none, your story keeps us on edge, and we dont' care if you have a life and can't update frequently! Much kudos to you for keeping us hooked on a great story.

Sometimes, even the pros have their stories 'write themselves'.
You should feel flattered that the story would take such time to
do such a thing on your behalf.... *wink wink*

-Jazz-

Wow... I knew something was wrong... This is freaky... I HATE NARAKU!!! And Inuyasha's going to be pissed... one question though. If Naraku doesn't have the jewel shards, than Kagome could easily purify him and run away. If he does have the jewel shards, then Kagome would have known right away that it wasn't Inuyasha, and also that it was Naraku (probably- he has alot more jewel shards than anybody else, after all.) This may be a loophole, or it may have been planned... I don't know, I was just pointing it out.
Please update! (I know, you said you don't like to be pushed, and I understand... I just LOVE this story...)

Addictively readable as always! I particularly enjoyed the shifts in tone in Kagome's and Sango's "he's in love with my butt" conversation - it is how I talk with my friends (if I was a futuristic miko and they were demon slayers I guess??), and it felt very real AND funny, which is sometimes a hard mix to get. It might be a little while between updates, but the chapters are always solid with lots of plot, so they are worth the wait. Any chances on seeing some work on Beneath the Skin? I thought there was definitely the begin of a really fun story there.Good wishes on getting real life to squeeze out enough room for writing!

Oh my goodness, this is great! I've been back to the site literally everyday looking for the next chapter. Inuyasha is gonna go balistic when he finds this out. Is Kagome going to purify Naraku's ass??? (pardon the language) Anywho, wonderful so far. Please update soon. Ciao~

Aaaaach! *high pitch scream* Naraku! You bastard! Hurry up, Inu. Kagome needs you! Urgh, umng, ach.

How sweet would it be for Kag's to really hear Inu say that he loved her. Ah! I've been waiting for that for so long, but you put enough into your chapters to keep stringing me along! Oooh, I want to see some more of Sessy-sama. Yeah....

I anxiously await your next chapter

Snowfall

houston, i believe we have problems.

wow!! thank god, you updated! i was really starting to worry about this story, but you have just assuaged my fears.

but what will happen now? what exactly is naraku's intent here? aduction? screwing around with them? worse?

oh, lordy, i have to find out what happens soon! lots of love and boxes of pocky to you!

Awwwwwwwwwwww! It's so sweet that Inuyasha loves her, but then again he deserves a choking for not coming out and saying what he needs to say. Then again I love the suspense and hope he won't be eating his foot for dinner for saying something stupid...........What am I kiddin'? As if he wouldn't get my hopes up, but I hope I'm wrong. I love the chapter. Keep 'em comin'.

YES!!! YES YES YES YES YES!!! Finally an update, thank you!!! Oh man, i've waited so long for this update... man, you sure took your time this time around eh? Oh well, i know how hectic your life is so i'm used to it, so no matter how long it takes for you to update i'll always read and review, since this story kicks some unholy amount of ass.

Now, first off, big congratulations on winning those places at IY fanfiction guild, i too was nominated there as you know but sadly i didn't get that far at all... oh well, better luck next time for me eh?

Now, for the review: Excellent chapter as usual, some serious talking, some humour and lastly, a nasty cliffie with a HUGE twist... wow, that's all i can say, i can see that the plot thickens eh? You have me at the edge right now and i pray you'll update soon again, though i know it will take a while but i'm more than willing to wait for it since there is no way in hell i'll miss the next chapter after you left in in a cliffie like that one.

With that being said, hope to hear from you soon and thank you for the excellent update, see ya!

GREAT CHAPTER! I'm not jumping on a bandwagon of what the hell why did it take so long, but I was glad to see it today and it was a good addition as usual. Whenever you can update, I love your story! Don't let pushy people get to ya!