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i'm back reading again, i've been off and on reading fanfics, i love the story up so far, kagome and inuyasha are going though so much crap. i can't wait to read more, i hope ya update soon, but take your time. ^_^

Good work! The chapter started off with Naraku torturing Kagome and InuYasha with emotional and physical trashings. InuYasha transformed. Then InuYasha and Kagome agonized over their own personal insecurities, but continued to support each other. Lastly, Kagura and Kikyio did a little cat fighting. Over all, it seemed like Naraku was trying to pull another "trick'em into murdering one another" scheme. I was glad it did not go his way; though, I am worried why Naraku might be wanting InuYasha to "mark" Kagome. Did I read that wrong? Thank you so much for the update. It was great! Cynbad146

Oh yay another chapter! Perfect start to the day if I do say so myself. Your writing is fabulous as always. I'm particularly impressed with this portion of the plot - where you can see how all the pieces are being set in place for something big, but you can't see how it will occur and what the results will be. Good suspense - will Inuyasha ever get it together to tell Kagome how he feels, will Kagura discover in time why she is being left with Kikyo, will Kikyo ever be redeemed.....awesome, classic Inuyasha stuff, with your own personal touches. And yes, you can tell how much you enjoy Kagura's character. Whenever Kagura takes sent stage in your story, she shines especially brightly.

Anyways, keep on doin' that thing you do.

I love the dialogue between Kagura and Kikyo. I never did manage to dislike kagura but i think the Inu's story would have been a lot better without her. :)

Uhh, I meant kikyou, I like kagura, the story is better without kikyou! Damn keyboards...doesn't type what you want.

Oooooh.... spicy, now things are going to get interesting... you evil little... giving us a plot like this with twists and turns that make us addicted and then torture us with more addiction like this... but seriously, wonderful work on this chapter, just plain wonderful, i've completely run out of praises to use when reviewing this fic so i'll have to settle for something less than what i want to say, i can't help it, i've just run out of praises to use! I just hope you'll keep updating this wonderful fic as soon as you can, that is all i wish.

I loved this chapter! Excellent job as always especially with the IYKAG angst. Poor Kagome! I can't believe she kissed Naraku! Ewwwwwwwww... But my favorite part had to be the banter between Kagura and Kikyou. I liked how Kagura put her in her place and the swearing like a sailor was a nice touch. She's definitely an interesting character but I wonder if Sesshy is gonna play a role anytime soon? I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Ooooooo! Awwwwww! Everything is starting to fall into place. I like it. Ch. 19 was great. I definitely would be sick if I kissed Naraku too. Anywho, please keep them coming. I love this story.

Good thing you didn't leave it a one-shot........ :o)

aweeeeesomeeeeeeeee


keep going =)

update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!