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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person penpaninu
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm always here for you! Happy birthday by the way. And bloody good show as always! I was pleasantly surprised to see an update, but very pleased. You rock!
person karla
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you can give those flamers of yours a message: Fuck them!!!
i think your work is great, you have cool writing skills and i hope you keep it up. tell that Anon-whatever to go fuck himself!
Keep writing pretty please!!!! i want to know if Inuyasha will ever sum up the courage to take Kag as a mate.
maybe or maybe not in his demon form. demon form please!!
person vtchachi
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really enjoyed the scene with Naraku and why can't Inuyasha just come clean?! Baka. I mean he had the perfect chance, Kagome just went through it and would understand what he went through. Oh well, I am sure it will all work out. I love Kagura as well. She is so dynamic. Thanks for another great chapter!
person vtchachi
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Naraku! What a cliffhanger. Sorry this is so late :( I have kind of fallen behind since school has started, but I have been itching to catch back up on this story. And you have done an awesome job, I am dying to find out what happens next. I can't wait to read the next chapter tom.
Thanks for the great chapter!
person firedevil798
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY! I just love your complicated plot...I just can't get enough of your fanfic! You have talent! Honestly, you should erase all of the InuYasha stuff in LOVE POISON and get it published, or, write a whole new story and get it published. If you do get ANYTHING of yours published, be sure to contact me. I will SOOO by your book. Just love the way you describe everything and make it so clear about how InuYasha feels and how he thinks. Now, because of you, I fully understand him. Keep up the outstanding work, and I really hope that InuYasha will quickly tell Kagome the truth...it's killing me! ^-^

Ja ne~
firedevil798

PS: Contact me at cindy_ho798@hotmail.com.
person Amonymouse
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that flamer is a pathetic loser who just searches for fights. Forget him. Keep writing, chick, your story is a great one.
person liany
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're absolutly right. You have all the right in the world to be mad and yet you chose to be peaceful about it. I could have never been so relaxed about it. And sincerely you shouldn't even give a dam about anon. I bet they're just jealous because you're a very good authour. I'm not trying to spoil you but you're really good.

I've been reading your story since a month after you post it and I liked it from the start. And I'm very hard to please. So you have my complete support. Don't ever give up because of them. And I'm sure that many of your readers agree with me. just continue to wright and update when you can. ^_^
Pls forgive me for not leaving an e-mail address but I don't want to waste time deleting their trash because they just love annoying people and push their luck so much.
person cynbad146
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YoukaiMusashi,
Just checking in. I think the story is just as good the second time around as it was on the first. Cynbad146
person ladyireland4
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have go to post more...I am hopelessly enthralled.
person JupiterIris
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's been the longest time since I last read a chapter of this. I think I got to the middle, then stopped for a couple months, lost the name, then finally found it again and finished it. You are indeed an amazing writer. Clear, descriptive, and aware of proper characterization. Not to mention very good at writing love scenes. I'm a big fan of Rozefire, and she's an absolutely respectable role model for me to continue to write. In a little while you will be at her level (it's not like your that far off).
Some people just feed off anger. They look for a fight, and they spend their time insulting and hurting. Critcism is good if it's constructive, but simple, pathetic flames are just poor in character and intellect. This person was just plainly idiotic and impatient. And the insults were not deserved.
You are one of my favorite authors, chick, so get the next chapters going, will you? :)