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for LOVE POISON

by YoukaiMusashi

person Vylest
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am just SO in love with this story, YM! I totally love you and your writing to death! Please never stop writing and update whenever you can--I would really love and appreciate that. I just keep reading some of those sexy chappies over again 'cause god knows I can't WAIT for EL LIMON!! LOL. Til' next reviewin' time, keep cool! This whole story is just down right frickin' sweet!

With awesome luv,

The Vylest--Ur #1 Fan
person azurephoenix
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was quite amazing, your use of imagery is wonderful and tugs at the readers emotions. Please update soon.
person chio
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI..I love your story. please update soon.
person Cynbad146
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YM, Are you now only excepting registered reviewers at MM? While I was there, I wanted to tell you it was great reading on the second time around, but MM was only excepted registered reviewers. I am guessing that either you are dealing with rude reviewer(s) or maybe you did not remove the check in the box for registered reviewers only. I was sad that I could not leave you a happy note. I am glad I can do it here. I can not wait for your update. Cynbad146
person Lori
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, wonderful work~ I can't wait for the next chappie =)
person kokoro no miko
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully intriguing and beautifully done! Although you seemed concerned about your command of English early on, you have nothing to worry about. It's obvious that English is not your original language--yours is too good(lol)! Poor Inu! It must be horrible to see yourself as three completely unworthy things: weak human, mindless animal youkai, and filthy hanyou. I'm sure that you've already worked out a way for Kagome to convince him otherwise. I can hardly wait for the next update--I've only recently found this, and read through it all in about the space of a day and a half!
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel like such a heel for not keeping up with my reviews of your wonderful work ususally it takes me at least and hour as I read it and write notes to myself on wonderful things that I loved such as the imagery of having Inuyasha wiggling his knee up and down just like in the anime. You do such a good job of keeping everyone in character and your discriptions are so vivid that I can clearly picture the scene in my mind. This is very compleling and moving story that just sweeps me away and always leaves me wanting more. Your pacing and timeing are exquisit unlike my poor spelling. I really can't say enough but I will definatly try to say it more often. You totally rock!
person drake220
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! Stupid midterms, stopping me from going online and seeing a fabulous new chapter! I liked the chapter, especially the ending b/c it was effortlessly creepy. The Kikyo masturbation scene was good too, sexy in a distubring 'hi-i'm-a-stalker' type way. BTB, what was with the hinthint to that other girl w/ my name? I sure as hell can't draw! Wish I could...Oh and I love you too. (aren't online grandiose statements great?)
person sky ginsbury
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so good!! Keep up the good work! ~.~
person krystal
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! must read next chap. MUST READ YM STORY GOODNESS!!!.....oh and happy birthday! X3