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for Striking A Deal

by KogasAngel

person Kinnara, Lady from Hell
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inu-Yasha did WHAT?! He chose the dead bitch?! Where's my 80 mm?! I'll KILL him! Good story though, the couple I wanted, but not in the way I thought it would be. *finds it* Ah, here it is. *hides it* Don't mind me, I'll just find him, and scare him a bit...*sound of gunshots, and insane laughter* That should do it. *shot of hanyou, fainted*
person Emmi
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!! I especially loved it when Sesshomaru was like "How do I kill thee?..Let me count the ways" to Inuyasha, I thought that was awesome!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!
10/10
person Shadowknight
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work so far. Read up through chapter 3, and all I can say is kudos for a Sess/Kag fic that makes logical sense. Too many have Kagome just acting like a hormone driven slut, and of weaker will than shown in both the anime and manga. The S/K mating was a little fast, though fitting for the plotline. I shall read more when I've the time to, and likely add more review material. :)
person Michelle
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved this story! !


I've said it before and I will say it again your a talented writter.
I can't wat for the updates on your other storys. I loved how this one turned out, it got me hot and I laughed so hard so many times I didn't know what to do with myself. If you should ever write a book or novel of your own please contact me I will buy it in a heartbeat.

Michelle
person Ms. Ikumi
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, Inyasha is yet again royaly screwed in the love department. Oh well, he desearves it. He's an asswhole, anyway/ Good job!
person Ms. Ikumi
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*thumbs up*
Hee-hee.


(...that's it? Not much of a reveiw...O_o)
person lost child
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story. Truely enjoyed it. ur a good writer. Keep it up!
person Eye of Ra
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* that was awesome. Sesshomaru is great... granted... he may be awesome and all.. but NO ONE can be Naraku... *smirks*

lol. yeh. it was really well written. ^_^ nice details too. heh. yep. that was good. ^_~
person bluefoxx005
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!!!!
person flare4ever
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I could feel all the hurt Kagome had recieved and all the love as well... I can't wait to see your next piece of work! CONGRATS!!!

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