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for Striking A Deal

by KogasAngel

person babygirl
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. But i was wondering if you where going to post winds of change on this site too. I really love that story and now i can't read it because a.s.s in now off line. Well anyway i sure hope you do i would love to read it again. See ya soon.
person Person Of A Strange Origin
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. and I congraduate you for being able to keep your hentai side at bay as I never could. But I'm still trying. This has been Poaso or Person Of A Strange Origin.
person Anna
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O......M......G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUCKING GOOD!! ^^ bejesus... i litterally laughed AND cried! gahhh!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOD! hehe...sexy lemons! and sweet parts! and angst, omg lots of angst! but a VERY good plot and ending...OMG! lol. welp, i think you deserve an A++++++++++++++++ and it wouldn't hurt my new found love for you(scary right?) if you made a sequal! maybe like...oh i don' t know! you'd think of something! i personally loved the way you wrote it. most people who write on AFF just write stupid, smutty, disgusting and random lemons...but your's had a plot and was written in a beautiful manner! i bow down to you oh great author (or authoress, i'm to tired to check). welp, that about covers it...
PS: did i mention that it was good??? ^.^
person sel
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Giggles* Very nicely done, I enjoyed this story very much as I do most of the ones you write.

Sel~
person anon no more
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. I hope you write again. I'll be looking.

person Sarah
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, Bravo...Very good how origonal, very sassy if i must say so..Okay i stop using weird weird words, and put it simple, and straight to the point. It was brilliant and i loved it !!!1 well done 10/10
person Blackat
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O MY FUCKING KAMI!!!!!!! That has got 2 b 1 of the greatest fanfics ive ever read and so funny 2 even though i still have one qestion.
Does Jaken have gential herpies/warts?!! LOL hahaha!!!!
Keep up great work c-ya around
person KELLI
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JUST WANTED TO SAY HOW ABSOLUTELY F**CKING AWESOME THIS STORY WAS! NOT ONLY DID I GET ALL MY FIX OF SESSHOUMAROU SEX (DAMN HE'S HOT!) BUT I ACTUALLY LAUGHED MY ASS OFF AT SOME PARTS, ESPECIALLY JAKEN AND THAT "DOLL SEX" SCENE! I'M A HUUUUGE SESSHO FAN AND AVE READ LITERALLY DOZENS OF STORIES ABOUT HIM AND THIS ONE WAS BY FAR THE BEST! SURE LIVENED UP A DULL EVENING FOR ME-THANKS!
person anon no more
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent story. Very detailed, believable and erotic.

person Kinnara
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Not Kanna! Why did that bastard, Naraku, hurt her? *sniff* I understand that she wanted to be with *sniff* Kagura, but...I can't...I CAN'T write this. Good story tho. Kikyo 'the bitch' got what she deserved.