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for Striking A Deal

by KogasAngel

person hazel
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so good but had some spelling errors but it was good. We need more storys and sex parts like this. I cried and laughed and

WTF are those red spots on Jaken?

lmao Keep up the good work
person madmiko
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Terrific! A great story from start to finish. Very well-written. Loved the humor in it. Gotta read more of your stuff now!
person AnImEpRiNcEsS101
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAAAAAMN! that was soooo good... i must say if i hadn't read the author's note in one of the previous chapters I might not have read on... for awhile there i thought Kouga would get her but that just didn't seem to fit! THANK GOD! Now I can have my sexy, beautiful, gorgous, handsome, erotic... (well you get the point) wolf all to myself! HAHAHAHA wow (if ur wondering im insain right now b/c it's like 2 am....) G8 story!
person Reya
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mou! I really enjoyed reading this fic. Great job!
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wish you would stay withih the lines of the computer!
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, for some reason I thought I had already read this story and had reviewed it. Glad I decided to check and make sure. I enjoyed reading each and every chapter and hated to see it come to an end. Excellent work!!!
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS JUST, HOW DO I SAY IT, DOWN RIGHT PERFECT. I LOVED IT FROM BEGINNING TO END.
person Jessica
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have so many things to ask!!!!! How many pups did Kagome have? Was it a Boy or Girl? Same goes for sango.....And who is the Girl that InuYasha is with?You relly should of kept the storie goin.....other then that ILoved it
~*^^*~ Jessica
person inu_lover1978
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS. ONE OF THE BEST ONES YET.
person Alex
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love that line!
"How do I kill thee, let me count the ways..."
its a really famous poem by elizabeth! thats good! i love it!