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for Striking A Deal

by KogasAngel

person Ceaseless Cloudy Days
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, man! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! That part where Kanna showed Sesshomaru that little image of Kouga and Kagome making out sort of reminded me of a part from the fanfic, "Dark Hearts in Winter", or something like that. Yeah. That was incredibly irrelevant. Please continue soon.
person Gem
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading form start to finish - very well done. For the amount of sex in there you managed to inject a lot of humor too (not that I'm complaining in ANY way about the R content, wouldn't be reading if I didn't like). The story is pretty good on its own is all. Nice Inuyasha twist by the way, pay back's a bitch ain't it.
person Hillary
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow
person sesshysgirl08
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! This story is really good and very catchy. I love the plot and it is just a very addicting fic!!!! Great job with this and please update soon!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!! - sesshysgirl08-
person Ceaseless Cloudy Days
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whooooa, what is this, a love SQUARE?! LOL...and I have a question...does Inuyasha have true feelings for Kagome, or is he just being possessive? And for some reason, I'm enjoying the Inuyasha bashing. I've never, EVER seen Inuyasha bashing during a fanfic, especially an adult fanfic. o.o It's usually Kikyo or Kagome that gets bashed, but that's about it. Still though, it's new for me, and I'm loving it! Please continue this! Once again, I love your quick updates!
person bettychan
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Inu. Oh well, he had his chance with Kagome, and screwed it up. I just hope Rin has enough flowers to make him prettiful. I snickered all through that part. Poor Jaken. He never can seem to look the right way, is it going to be the death of him? Go Sess!
That was another great chapter. Update as soon as yu can. I need to read more.
person Librastargirl16
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't like what Kikyo has planned (shakes her head then shudders) why can't the bitch stay dead? :P Anyway I enjoyed this chapter! It was really good and as always humorous which I love!
person Ceaseless Cloudy Days
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha!! Inuyasha...in a maid suit? But wait...they didn't have those French maid suits at the time...but I guess Sesshomaru must've thought of one of those old Japanese kimonos meant for a maid? Despite all the Inuyasha bashing, I'm just loving this story. And I kinda like Kikyo's little plot. ^_^;;
person Librastargirl16
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool you updated! ^_^ I was working on the second chapter of my Guilty Gear humor fic but I happen to be passing by. I read the 7th chapter and I must say it was funny especially when Miroku saw Sesshoumaru instead of Kagome or when Inuyasha became Kikyo's bitch. Hehe, Inuyasha got burned :) nice work with this and I look forward to reading the next chapter. I haven't grown bored once of all the chapters I've read so far so keep up the awesome work and thanx a bunch for giving me persmission (bows) YOU RULE!
person sesshouchick
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
8th Chapter was hilarious Jaken really doesn't know when to stop does he? Oh well....I can't wait to find out what Kikyou has in store for Inuyasha he deserves it. How is Sesshou going to make up for humilating Kagome like that? I hope you update again soon I'll be waiting